Congrats on you're first! Like others, I'm not liking the text . . . the top might pass but change up the bottom title and make it a lil' smaller.
Watch out designing in RGB, your gonna loose alot of those saturated reds and yellows in the foreheads if they're getting out of CMYK gamut. Flatten in PS and convert to CMYK and see if your color suffers. You don't want to learn the hard way, you'll wonder why it printed "muddy or desaturated"