I already posted this but please gimme yall opinions

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May 16, 2003
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Man I worked hard on this idea and only like 2 people gave me their input. I think this idea is hot to death but BART want feelin it. Lemme know honestly

...What's up yaw I'm new to the siccness I'm from tha row message boards. Yall seem real as fuck and I was thinkin of comin out to the bay once my album is done to promote, so I was thinkin if yall could give me some opinions on my gimmic/concept for my rap persona:

Sort of like Kool Keith's Black Elvis: I'm THE BURGLAR MACK. He's a ladies man who fucks at least 6 bitches a night. He's deep in the street game, but not drug dealin - he's into runnin up in houses and stealing shit. He's been doin the shit since he was 7 and now he's a playa in his late 20's who can't retire for the love of the game. He's a billionaire from all the skrilla he made from the game - so he don't need it but he just CAN'T STAY AWAY. The video has him payin off the cops and shit, drivin his white hummer around town with 24 inch platinum rims, and he just parks the hummer right out in front of the house cuz the cops won't fuck wit him. He's runnin up in the house through the window with the eel skin leather gloves with the long white leather trench. He gets a fresh fade with fresh waves every day and keeps his facial hair on point with the goatee and the line around the chin.

He goes into the house through the window and he's just waklin around the house not even sneakin - and he's like lookin through the peep hole through a door and sees like 2 women (models) givin eachother massages and shit with the scented cocoa butter and the minty fresh hundred year old wine. So he just walks in and freaks em both out (but the camera turns away cuz it's too graphic). He comes out the room and just takes like a toaster or a TV and walks out the door in the middle of the morning and throws big face hundreds (and sometimes thousnads) everywhere.

He does this cuz he knows what he does is sinful and wrong but he JUST CAN'T STAY AWAY FOR THE LOVE OF THE GAME.

Kids see him in the mall with his minks and $350,000 dollar chain and give him props. He just snatches bitches away from any man cuz he's not just a burglar, he's A MACK.

Anyway the video has shots of him sitting by his fireplace (where he's burnin money) and the picture of his mama on his fireplace (who was a good woman with the church) and he's shedding a tear cuz she dead and he's still in the game...BUT HE JUST CAN'T STAY AWAY CUZ HE DON'T KNOW NO BETTER.

Video ends with him walkin to his dead homies widow's house (WHO WAS HIS PARTNER IN THE GAME TIL HE GOT BLASTED BY THE POLICE) and takin care da family by givin her big faces and shit. He walks into the sunset.
 
Mar 13, 2003
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THAT SHIT IS THE DUMBEST FAGGOT IDEA I HAVE EVER HEARD. SOUNDS LIKE SOME 3D HIGH CONCEPT GAY PORN. YOU PIECE OF SHIT HOW'S ABOUT YOU STICK YOUR HEAD UP MY ASSHOLE SO I CAN SHIT ON YOU IN 3D?

EAT A DICK