Give me some input on my song writing, Wrote this for my female singer

[Auditory6]

Give me some input on my song writing, Wrote this for my female singer. Wrote the intro and hook. Also produced the track. Let me know your thoughts if u got a minute

Top track at www.Soundclick.com/auditory

 

[Auditory6]

toppin

 

[Auditory6]

yezzzir

 

[BASEDVATO]

Your shits dope, I always thought your top 4 producer beat maker on this board. I just don't see why you don't take the tags off those beats and get them in the hands of some artist that can really do something with them.

You have a mainstream feel. Some artist, even the major ones in bay, need that for trying to push to radio ect.

 

[Auditory6]

If you got access to them feel free to send it there way