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hunnedon

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friend of mine is making a local mixtape (kansas city id post this in the midwest forum but there iisnt shit in tehre) and he told me if i wrtie a verse he'll put me on this original song he's doin about cars and shit...this is all i got so far

i'm pushin a cutlass, city's most flaunted,
got four 15's, knockin under the bonnet,
blades ridin big, you know they up on it,
ghostride it so much, niggas say it's haunted,
boast till I toast it, wrap it like a burrito,
crashed so many, Geico thinks I'm bandito,
no fraud just lazy, my rates rose like crazy,
now I'm uninsured, word is it don't phase me,
keep rollin like sixty over, tickets get ripped,
if I hit your car, I keep drivin I don't give a shit
if you see me in traffic ,I'll break an dip,
smash it ain't lil, but the trunk can still flip

writing shit is HARD
 
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hunnedon

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K.C.Assassin said:
Thats real nice cuddie where you from and who shit you trying to put that on.
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i grew up like 17&quindaro my cuz is just a party dj right now but he wants to do a mixtape not like he has his name in the streest or anything right now
 
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hunnedon

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Yo i wrote a couple more tlel me if you feel these better




I'm gonna get that, riches and green,
I'm Betty Crockerish, with a leprechaun sheen,
The world look at me, they say where you at,
I look at the world, say who is that,
Lived long enough, to know when to care
Don't look at me, I won't return your stare,
Simply aware, at night I am beware,
Of coward muthafuckas, that wanna kill a player,
I've had a scare, and now the games deeper,
Than nines and glocks, pistols and beepers,
I stay a creeper, from the hill to the low,
Jeans stay baggy cut, so I can pack a four,
Got mad at me, they shot at me,
I'm a lucky mothafucka, win the lottery,
I gotta be, in these triflin ass times,
Just to stay alive, when a four's a nine

You say I'm not lyrical, well I say I'm a miracle,
Take a look at ya head, bitch it ain't spherical,
What's this mean?, If it ain't round it got edges,
So if you ain't smooth, better clip them hedges,
In laymens terms, it means cash is hard to earn,
And you don't got none, you a square with a perm,
So don't dare talk to me, about hustlin boy,
Unless you got rims, dunked in chrome alloy,
Unless you got a house, paid for an decked out,
I don't give a damn, about diamonds in your mouth,
It's all about, the bottom line the bank account,
If the checkbooks negative, you ain't go no amounts,
So don't dare flash, if the shine ain't real,
I don't false advertise, I stay true to the deal,
Your busta fake ass, might win you some hoes,
But when it comes down to figures, nigga i know
 
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