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Mic B

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May 2, 2002
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got bored of looking threw this forum wit hardly any flows in it. thought i would just add one.


Im coming cold on tha mic like an ice cream cone/ fucced up yo shit/ messing up yo urine system like a kidney stone/realsing all the slugs from my clip/ roll on my side/ ur wit me then ya gone/you just cant handle/ to be wit this/now witness/as I fuck chicks/ im so sic/ leaving em wit syphilis/ you couldnt even sit wit this/ its contagious/ this chlamydia got me making minimum wages/ nasty discharge/ diss me/ and ima make u diss-regard/ everything uve said/ and everything u done/ so i make u give me head/up to ya grill is a loaded gun/ shooting hard like a loaded ton/rolling real deep/ i roll silent has i creep/ got my task/ fitted on my mask when i peep/ spitting thugish on tha beat/ not claiming tha street/ but when confronted i dotn fucking retreat/ get back up in ya face/ my problems to your's couldnt relate/ for this is my fate/ unless u take my life and recreate/ this is me/ and there aint no replace/ ment/ got u locked down in my basement/ ready to unleash some truley sic shit/ gruely/ as I make yo face as a mask/ its a good fit/ fast when i rip yo girls clit/Im constinetly mean/ being sicc because ima fein/ now watch as i rip yo rectum out wit ya spleen/ im starting a brand new rap sceene/ im starting a brand new game/ i dont keep my rap clean/ Beamatina, but mic B is my brand new rap name/ no tag team/on a mission to rap fame/ spitting vicious off my brain/so i smoke pot/ havent got caught/ smoking and killing fo ever/im gonna tickle yo fear like a feather/ because i got a fucced up thought.
 
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-TiM C-

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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typical topic.. but has some cool shit in it..


not claiming tha street/ but when confronted i dotn fucking retreat/ get back up in ya face/ my problems to your's couldnt relate/ for this is my fate/ unless u take my life and recreate/ this is me/ and there aint no replace/ ment/

that shit was cool rite there.. keep at it...
 
MR. TYPCEE

MR. TYPCEE

Sicc OG
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Apr 25, 2002
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i gotz a fukked up thought bout blood spotz from tha bursted blood klot, im much off that narcoticz and my choice of drug iz pot, blood shot eyez, and bout az crazy az a ENE wanna be, besides, tha drama be, just like a lottery, take ya chance, strait siccer than all formz of sodomy, rio villa barrio be tha colony, where all them soljaz fold ya, strait soljaz representin that northside armory, who stated that? itz that criminal, real gangstaz dont talk so i keep my shit minimal, so low pro ima put it down subliminal, cant no town git more lyrical than mine, cuttin off ya blood supply each time i rhyme, north side, leavin half theze haterz flat line in 9.16 secondz flat time, thatz right!!! rollin down tha Franklin -B street, dont act like you didnt see me....takin all ya lives, carved in yo forehead a BP, shit gitz freaky, typcee hit that 51-fifty, smokin that fukkn beedee, gittin shifty, paranoid az fukk, swear my own mamaz out to git me, whoz shadowz creepin up? oh itz just me, damn that blunt musta bin laced with other stuff, fukk it, take more puffz so i stay numb, dunno, thas just how it iz where im from, hearin voices, constantly on tha run...$idewayz

~*MR. TYPCEE*~
 
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All Out HOGG

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#8
#8

Suggestion???

LEARN HOW TO BREAK UP YA BARS!!!...Its confuseing to read...A bar is every 2 lines...Ya should put the slashes between the first & 2nd line... THAS IT...I.E.

The car goes far// It drives me to the bar

Not how ya do it...I.E.

The car// goes// far// it drives me// to the bar
 
MR. TYPCEE

MR. TYPCEE

Sicc OG
#9
Apr 25, 2002
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itz all good homie...thankz for tha imput...but not quite what i wuz lookin for...and my explanation for disreguarding your suggestion...i just kinda like writing like i flow...nonstop. but thankz anyway...$idewayz

~*MR. TYPCEE*~
 
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All Out HOGG

Guest
#10
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^^^Naw...I was refering to Mic B...I could read ya shit just fine...Its not the lack of bars that makes it complicated...Its the fact that his has a bar every three words...I don't think he knows how to place em & just puts em there for some reason?
 
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All Out HOGG

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#14
#14

If ya wanna battle...Post a verse against me [Make a new thread]...LOL
 
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