front & back

[TRAJIK1]

heres a front and back i did. my best work i think, but keep in my i'm still learning. any feedback is appreciated & i would love pointers!

 

[romula88]

pretty cool that backround is real original i like it a lot. didnt like how the face is covered up tho.

 

[Likwid]

You did a really good job on the cutouts especially for being a beginner. Back then my shit would have looked all jagged! The things that need a lil work are the colors and huhes because your photo and the background don't really match lighting wise. Good job with perspective though ( your photo to the building photo), alot of people would have fucked that one up

The back cover is cool. The intro is cutoff though at the top and a less heavy font will give you better placement.

 

[Married2daAve15]

I like the back. I'd say make the text smaller(on the back) and work on the contrast in the front pic...Some of the text in the front gets lost too...nice start though..

 

[TRAJIK1]

coo thanx for the feedback & i'll use ya'll advice!

 

[azryda420]

Make the copyright font on the back smaller. Then move it down a bit.

Coo though.

On the front I think white font with green outline might be a lil different too. Do both and compare them.

 

[kingsvillektp]

looks generic as fuck... but good work

 

[TRAJIK1]