First Post, First Flow

[IntenseFear]

I'm a unique individual like a retard amongst the norm
Trashing your existense like cities touched by storms
A walking nightmare.. muthafuckas call me a demon
I got a sick & sadistic soul so that's probly the reason
Never caught bleedin.. test and get ripped in ya jaw
Call me a returns agent.. repossessing what was givin by God
That means your life little bitch don't ever get it twisted
You'll get airlifted when my followers start hitting like Pistons
You niggas must be gifted.. and I aint talking talent-wise
Cuz fucking with me will break your heart more than Valentines
I'm shifty like a manual tranny.. collisions causing nifty dents
IntenseFear muthafuckas my name bout to bigger than 50 Cent

 

[SlangsumLangsam]

4 sho for a first time flow thats dope bud work on doublin up rhymes but other then that its coo, i dont got ur flow prolly so u prolly spit it siccer but cha

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[Anghellic831]

tight shit

 

[BIG CHORIZO]

bud work on doublin up rhymes

I'm assuming you were talking about Multi's. If so, he's got plenty in there.

EX:
amongst the norm/touched by storms
call me a demon/probly the reason
ripped in ya jaw/givin by God
talent-wise/Valentines
nifty dents/50 Cent

They were in there, just depends how you say them. Vato's not bad.

 

[Kurupt]

Tight shit Intense

 

[umbravo]

they call the kid umbravo and i'm bout to begin it
intense's shit was cool but the skill i'll implement it
pretend thugs are soft actin' hard and then push me
i feel like the board's gynocologist cause i'm always near pussies
who's the one that'll take you home
nick berg a lil' busta and then bake the dome
always slappin on bitches i'm the strange occurence
guess what? i just saved on my car insurance

 

[BIG CHORIZO]

guess what? i just saved on my car insurance

LOL classic shit.

 

[Anghellic831]

^^^^

 

[IntenseFear]

I'm a maniac behind the wheel.. a straight psycho
Fuck car insurance.. nigga I aint switching to Geico
You gon need life insurance after fuckin with me
Cuz I grab the pistol.. just clutch & then squeeze
Aint nobody on the planet that can hang in a flow
I'll make a nigga look like a burnt Q-tip.. blazin ya fro
I kick that wicked shit.. makin ya flows obsolete
Cuz I'm like a cinder block nigga.. straight droppin heat

 

[Anghellic831]

I'm a maniac behind the wheel.. a straight psycho
Fuck car insurance.. nigga I aint switching to Geico

LOL

 

[fiyastarta]

lol...im feeling that"thug poetry"do what u do

 

[IntenseFear]

Right on nigga.