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[SkARfAcE x925]

i juss started up... hit me up wit some feedback.. i kno i gotta get better but whatever.. here it is:


Artillery gotta get strapped up, gotta get some heat// splittin whigs, shootin pigs, i'm hot off these streets//niggas got me perkin, droppin leaners, rollin in beamers//foo's fuckin wit me gotta take um out wit my street sweeper//layin niggas out like a jackhammer//20 to life was my sentence in the slammer//


feeback.. pz

 

[SkARfAcE x925]

come on y'all.. hit me back wit some feedback.. good or bad i dont give a fuck.. i have room to improve.. juss started.. pz

 

[x-kalibur]

bad.. improve bitch.. lol.. pz

 

[SkARfAcE x925]

this was my first btw..

 

[SkARfAcE x925]

lol thanks for the feedback.. i aint trippen..