Feedback (must listen)....Richmond Shit

[Dr. Luni]

I need some feedback on a song i made not to long ago so if yall can vote about what u think about it ill gladly appreciate it. http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/loaded1music.htm

 

[Dr. Luni]

need feedback yall

 

[bayGIANTS]

it aint boo boo johnson, but it aint exactly something new. the beat is cool, the lyrics are ok, just a little shaky. they just need a little polishing.

 

[W0RM_Da_C0N]

^^^ read a dictionary mayn

nah just fucking wit cha, yea the beat is pretty raw, lyrics is aight nothin special concept is played out, the beat gets ya head movin though just some honest criticizm

 

[bayGIANTS]

^^^????

 

[W0RM_Da_C0N]

not you mayn i meant dr luni

 

[Dr. Luni]

thanx for the feedback uppin for some more feedback