Feedback is needed

[localstar907]

I just put a new track up called Money is my passion. Can I get some feedback siccness thanks in advance

 

[localstar907]

This is the link my bad

http://www.myspace.com/mgcstarmoney

 

[DFresh77]

Beat is dope, but you could have bee a little more creative with your lyrics and put a little more charisma into them as well....

but the song is not bad..the hook was a little annoying tho..

 

[0R0]

its not bad,really lost me with the hook tho,its way too repetitive

 

[localstar907]

Good look dfresh77 I made the beat too. Al Boo Boo good look on the feeback.