Dreams For My Children (DEEP SHIT)

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May 10, 2002
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sweet child of mine..I hope when you go outside the sun always shines..I hope you remember your greatest weapon is your mind/
I cope with the thoughts of what can happen through time..anything is possible...even probable dont ever wanna see you laying on a bed at the hospital/
so many questions to ask will my child have my style maybe even my smile?...boy or a girl I wish I could give you the world/
want to provide better for my children of course...all I want is to have happy kids and possibly a good marraige that wont end in a divorce/
i bet you'll have beautiful eyes..dont be surprised when shady fools tell you lies...acting like they friends, expect a disgise/
praying everyday you stay out of gangs and dont base your life on material things...believe you can acheive your dreams regardless of your enviornments scenes/
sometimes it seems like nothings going right..asking god why screaming in the twilight...stuck in a paradox loading ya glock with one shot..thiking bout puttin it to ya knot/
nobody ever said life was eazy but you make ya own destiny..you choose the acts that make up your childhood memories...hope I never let you down promise i'll always be around/
the shoulder to cry on when your sad..or just the person to argue with when your mad...never take a moment for granted you'll never feel alone and stranded..living my life tho it aint the way i planed it/
you gave me a reason to live from the start patched the hole in my heart..so this is joy? never thought about abortion rather create then destroy../
a piece of me..try and be the best father I can be protect you from stress...tattoo ya name across my chest thanking god cause through all the pain..for this I am blessed I must confess never think any less even after i'm put to rest/
 
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May 10, 2002
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thanks for the peep i've been thinking of writting this for awhile now it just finally came together and it dont matter if its simplistic its a poem not a rap so it gets away with it....
 
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Sicc OG
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Aug 4, 2002
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its good, but im not feelin the opening

sweet child of mine..I hope when you go outside the sun always shines..I hope you remember your greatest weapon is your mind/

^ good content i think, it just dont feel good comin out my mouth, but it i liek the (i hope i hope i cope with time )

this was my favorite part

so this is joy? never thought about abortion rather create then destroy../

i like it, but i dont like the gang/glock 2 ya knot stuff.. this could definately be worked into some dope shit rite on dogg..

(SOLO TRACK) LOL
 
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May 10, 2002
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the thing is i didnt write this for a album I just thought about all my worries and wishes for my children and wrote them down thats how i got my ideas....
 
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Sicc OG
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May 10, 2002
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lol pretty paper nah i can always show it to my kids down the road or something you never know...and i have to get messanger first but i'll hit you up peace out
 
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