damn is this shit raw..
- Thread starter lopro
- Start date
radiate???
that sounds like some nerd shit,
but nerds can be "cool" i guess,
not in this case, the techno beat has no type of identity at all, it doesn't even sound unique like your typical "unique" independent sound, more of a "i ripped off my favorite songs and somehow ended up with this"
the recording quality is good but the mixing is bad, like the delay or something is fucked up in a way that pisses you off
both verse and chorus lyric rhythms are the same so you cant tell when you go into the chorus,
there's no sort of change, just the same bars over and over and over
the whole preaching aint working either, like the way you rhyme butt rappe or spider web or some shit like that, it makes you look like a clown and not the funny type
your album covers make it look like you are on acid or something, you fighting some type of godzilla warewulf
im not trying to destroy your dream or hobbie, but you should look into getting some musical soul searching cause the whole thing looks like you were on acid
i mean cott damn!!!
lmao, what you smokin on!!!!!
anyways, you seem like a smart guy, make sure the lyrics actually rhyme(good), try to sound mainstream first so then you can separate yourself, cause it seems like you are out there "lost"
that sounds like some nerd shit,
but nerds can be "cool" i guess,
not in this case, the techno beat has no type of identity at all, it doesn't even sound unique like your typical "unique" independent sound, more of a "i ripped off my favorite songs and somehow ended up with this"
the recording quality is good but the mixing is bad, like the delay or something is fucked up in a way that pisses you off
both verse and chorus lyric rhythms are the same so you cant tell when you go into the chorus,
there's no sort of change, just the same bars over and over and over
the whole preaching aint working either, like the way you rhyme butt rappe or spider web or some shit like that, it makes you look like a clown and not the funny type
your album covers make it look like you are on acid or something, you fighting some type of godzilla warewulf
im not trying to destroy your dream or hobbie, but you should look into getting some musical soul searching cause the whole thing looks like you were on acid
i mean cott damn!!!
lmao, what you smokin on!!!!!
anyways, you seem like a smart guy, make sure the lyrics actually rhyme(good), try to sound mainstream first so then you can separate yourself, cause it seems like you are out there "lost"
