Critique My Freestyle Video

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May 4, 2009
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#21
see dude you just need to kick back. I even got these cats telling you I wasnt clowning. just laughin at the eli reference...
Honestly i dont give a god mutha fuckin damn what you meant.

this thread is to be taken serious and fuckin respected.

save all your childish ass bitchassness for neopets.com

im not the type of nigga you wanna try.
 

Kon1

Sicc OG
May 17, 2002
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#23
lol okay toughguy Imma head to work. you have a fun morning. siccness let this muthafucka know whatsup. i know i aint the only one laughin at this dude...
 
May 4, 2005
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#24
You are a attention longing dick craving bastard who desperately tries to get attention from guys who aen't talkin' to them.

find a role model asap.
You should go back to cpixel wit that faggot shit.

on a side note, you aint even the shit in minnesota suckah!!
 
May 4, 2009
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#25
ahaha @ siccness let him no whats up.

translation = he made me sad and i can't handle him by myself... help meeeee.

If you're this much of a hoe on the net i can only imagine the level of cowardice you are at in real life.

fuck your life and your ol i think im respected online ass so called life.
 

Meta4iCAL

Raider Nation
Feb 21, 2005
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#29
in all seriousness though you're freestyle was garbage

Kon's shit is way better

I mean... if you have some recorded shit I can judge more fairly I guess.... but based on your freestyle.............


































he might don't got it!
 
May 4, 2009
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#30
WHat does internet hate do to me?

Only sensitive ass lil nigglettes like yourself get hurt on the net.

Nigg get the fuck out my thread..

ahaha like 5 niggas just sonned by one person... wow..

you niggas need to get like the pixel faggots and start deletin' account when u get owned.

though im sure u rely on your butt buds to pull you out of every lil net jam.

niggas be runnin siccness beefin with nggas like thay hard... like they runnin the streets or some shit.

suck my dck.

i win.

know that shit, bitch!
 
Jun 23, 2008
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#32
Prove that shit.

Post a video faggot.

I'll bet $1000 you can't last one round in a battle with me.

Lol @ your signature... faggot ass nigga likes cam'ron.

anyone who likes him doesn't know shit about rap.

lol at this lil hating ass faggot talkin shit cuzz someone hurt his feelings earlier.

bruh i'll end your whole life on the mic.

do not fuck with me.

you really dont wanna fuck with my written shit.

fallthe fuck back

Remember that post
 
May 4, 2009
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#33
Nah.

I'm defendin' myself.

*Gets ready to obnoxiously lol*

LOLOLOL most assuredly this aint no act.

ask about me.

actin hard is where u get your so called goons to run with you on a website.
 
Mar 12, 2006
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#35
you want honest opinion??

your freestyle didnt say anything that hasnt been said a million times before.

birth days / worst ways

that doesnt make you lyrical or a multi-king. thats been done. been used. been played out.

keep working on your delivery, it was pretty boring.

your posts on here make you seem very insecure and over compensating. its a fucking forum......

"I WILL END YOUR LIFE, DONT TRY ME"

lol, come on man, who are you fooling?

get the fuck out. you arent ready for the siccness

edit:

BITCH
 
Apr 8, 2005
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#36
wtf... are you rapping in a sauna, you went off beat a few times, sounds like you said "im boobin" if so you makin shit up, yur delivery is garbage