City Boy - Money Is Politics

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Mar 17, 2007
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Everything looks good, few minor things though. Dude at the table looks huge, he looks bigger than Khalded an TI in front of him. Shadows, there kind of missing on a few things (ie. the gun on TIs lap) Not sure of the 'city boy' text, the whole 'Arial Black/Compacta' styling of text is starting to get old, would of liked to see something a lil more creative there.
Other than a few very minor things, it looks great. Keep up the work!
 
Apr 19, 2007
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Everything looks good, few minor things though. Dude at the table looks huge, he looks bigger than Khalded an TI in front of him. Shadows, there kind of missing on a few things (ie. the gun on TIs lap) Not sure of the 'city boy' text, the whole 'Arial Black/Compacta' styling of text is starting to get old, would of liked to see something a lil more creative there.
Other than a few very minor things, it looks great. Keep up the work!
Thanks for that feedback, I appreciate it. I didn't use arial tho...
 
Mar 17, 2007
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Thanks for that feedback, I appreciate it. I didn't use arial tho...
Yeah, I didn't think you did, but it's kinda in that same font family. Big, Bulky, Bold lettering. No prob on the feedback, I like it when people can take constructive criticism and not flip out lol Keep up the good work!
 
Jan 5, 2006
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#9
this is reall nice.. only one thing tho.. like mentioned before dude at desk looks kinda big.. and the guy in the very back, looks like jeezy or something.. but the glare on his forehead is kinda weird, seeing as the light is coming from the left side and not the top.