Check it out

[Jonah]

When I listen to the radio its like a slap to ear/
All this crap I hear, Its just whack this year/
Since Im better than the rest, I'll have a phat career/
I dont rap about no dance, no dont back that rear/
I spit the truth, I rap facts you fear/
Makin the record so hot that the wax'll smear/
I dont floss the chains, no special hats to wear/
But Imma boss not the same, nor the lack to care/
Ahead of the rap game- lookin back to glare/
Cats talkin gats-Like they pack a pair/
but when fags get attacked- retreating back in fear/
Cause they raps all are whack- Leadin the pack I steer/
Not yet Stackin the cash-believin' My stash this year/


Let me know what you think.

 

[CHRISHOGGALYPSE]

it sounds like it might sound cool recorded but lyrically I don't think it's that strong. But keep at it bro