CHECK IT OUT PLZZ

[Wssj x4]

I PUT 2 TRACKS ON SOUNDCLICK.. LET ME GET SOME FEEDBACK ABOUT IT/ IM STILL YOUNG N I NEED AS MUCH AS HELP N ADVICE/ PEEP IT OUT

http://www.soundclick.com/crazierimez

 

[NEWARKKILLA4NIA]

SOUNDS KOO, I AINT ONE TO JUDGE ANYONE, EXCEPT 4 MY OWN WORK, BUT SOME CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICIZM WOULD JUS B TO PRACTICE MORE ON DELIVERY, I JUST HEARD THE ONE ON THE BOTTOM.... YOU JUST NEED TO BE CLEARER AND PRONOUNCE WORDS COMPLETELY SO EVERYONE UNDERSTANDS EVERYTHING YOU SAY.... BUT DONT QUIT HOMIE, THIS RAP GAME IS HARD N IT GOT HATERS WHO GONNA SAY U AINT SHIT, BUT FUCK EM, JUS WORRY BOUT URSELF N KEEP UR HEAD UP N JUS WORRY BOUT WUT U THINK OF YOURSELF

 

[Wssj x4]

Thankz bro.. i sitll got years to go.. gotta leanr alot more.. i meen damn im only 15.. thnx newark appreaciate it

 

[Wssj x4]

If anyone gets teh chance check it out n tell me what you think

 

[SFxRyda]

nothin' 2 lose soundz coo...keep it up bro

 

[MRTHECOSE]

your on the right path....yea delivery can be worked on..but keep it up....

 

[559_Soldado]

i think its pretty coo. keep workin on your game and polish your skills