Can you tell me what you think of...?

[D Grade]

I just want to know what people think i can do better
im barely startin off so can you guys on siccness listen to my song and give some feedback??
the link is below
thanks in advance.
"Where U Are"
http://www.imeem.com/dgrade/music/tvvw_6bZ/d_grade_where_u_are/

 

[dramacydal77]

sounds good to me, this song sounds like it'd be on the radio, keep at it you got potential

 

[D Grade]

thanks man!
i appreciate it
come on everyone let me see some feedback please..