Can I please get Yall Honest Opinions!?

[scandal]

Me and my boy are young cats tryin make it big, you know the story. Well anyways I'm the producer and we just got our first song done in the lab and I wanna know what yall think. Please no hatin but Constructive criticism is welcome. Let me know what yall think of the beat and the rappers and the overall song. Thanks in advance.

http://www.myfilehut.com/userfiles/15411/Make Up_Master.mp3

 

[ESCOBAR]

thats the hardest shit to come outta the bay since dre dog dropped killa whale.....straight to to top homie....................keep grindin

 

[Hutch]

nice one scandal, that shits flossy - make another dozen tracks like that and Imma buy your disc

 

[MidWestMafia816]

the beat is ok..

 

[Meandme]

That's a nice melodic beat right there. I don't like the sped-up vocals though. Just not necessary, and I know a lotta people gettin sick of that shit. Plus it's so many producers already doin it... That's the criticism I'd give you.
I almost forgot... the bass is too discrete. It's a cool bassline, it just not strong enough. Barely audible.

 

[gitwitit]

i really like it...first guy rapping, tight voice. i agree on the bassline too. sounds mad east coastish, but who cares its a good track

 

[dj pimp]

shit was madd hott all the way around. spit was tight beat was ill. thats a serious track right there. who did the production?

 

[Frisco playa]

shit is hot mayne, keep doin ur thang and i like that sped up vocals on it

 

[Meta4iCAL]

shit is nice for real

keep doin it

 

[scandal]

Thanks 4 all the love guys. and 4 DJ pimp I did the production on it.

 

[SLRider510]

dam this song is clean..... thanks... now i gotta burn another cd... lol

 

[scandal]

4 sho GT slap that shit.

 

[scandal]

1 more thing I got a beat up on myspace if yall wanna check out some of my other shit, the beat on there I still not sure if ima sell it or do a song so check it out.

 

[NASA]

sounds pretty nice

 

[BooZYtheKlOwN]

Definently feeling the flows, tight shit right there... The beat was good not great agree that the base was Way too soft, Very good melody to it though... The singing hook is OK but the female in the background HAS TO GO, but thats just me Ive never been one to like that type of song, I almost always skip a song with a R/B singing type hook on it... The only song that I dont skip off the top of my head would be The Way You Feel off of Northern Exposure 1...

So all in all, good track, Id give it a 7.5/10...