CAN I GET FEED BACC ON THIS SONG ????

[Tanqueray Loc]

(CHORUS)
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the lord my soul to keep/
If I should die before I wake,
I pray the lord my soul to take/

And if I get a chance at life,
I pray the lord to make it right/
And if I'm just a bastard,
Then I pray the lord to take my life/

(VERSE-1)

Chick you better get an abortion, see what I'm saying is like make that little bastard gone/
I aint taking care of no kids, plus aint no having babies on your own/
So kill that little bastard, All that extra stress, I don't need it/
by any means that child wont never make it trick, you best believe it/
Wont conceive it, and I don't give a shit bout what you think about it/
make you miss carry, its scary, when you really think about it/
Slick, what you mean I should a strapped up/
Should a had ya stuck ass on birth control, just for the back up/
I'm saying Girl you knew that aint want no kids, so go and handle that bizz/
Make that appointment, before you make have to split your wig/
This aint no game, you're dealing with some body's well being/
Well being that I got a daughter, this a child the world wont be seeing/
Hold up, I care but not enough to have some kids with ya/
My life is twisted, more mouths to feed a make me way sicker/
Chicks forcing men to have babies, and they forcing men to have em not/
So if its I aint got no say, then of course they gone be having knots/
Of course these chicks is having plots, popping holes in condoms/
skipping birth control then acting like the situation aint no problem/
Damn that's snake, maybe you just trying to eat off my plate/
And kick your feet up, while you eat up my steak/
Get out my face, and miss me with that you're gonna leave and I don't have to worry/
Soon as you hit with hard times, child supports coming in a hurry/
To get me, to get my checks, to get my license and my taxes/
All because you mother struck, and some faulty ass actions/

(CHORUS)
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the lord my soul to keep/
If I should die before I wake,
I pray the lord my soul to take/

And if I get a chance at life,
I pray the lord to make it right/
And if I'm just a bastard,
Then I pray the lord to take my life/

(VERSE-2 "THE FETUS")

Man I aint do this shit, daddy why you so angry at me/
Like I cant hear what you saying, why do you regret me/
So now its my fault, and I don't get to see the world at all/
or get to breathe a breath of air or get the same freedom as yall/
Dude this bogus, because all I'm hearing is you just threatening my life/
like I'm not worth it, why you just cant make mommy your wife/
That would be perfect, so what's the purpose of even loving at all/
See I'm so stressed now, that if I make it I' won't be dealing with yall/
So just abort me, miss carry me, like this shit is even scaring me/
I'm a soldier like daddy, so daddy I wont let you worry me/
Mommy if you was smart, you would just pack your shit and leave when he's sleep/
I know you scared, and sick from every little thing that he speaks/
I'm getting bigger everyday, but he don't care/
And I'm knowing I'm about to die, but I cant say that I'm prepared/
Man what's this woozy feeling, and I can swear I just saw light/
My space is closing in on me, so this must be what death is like/
Now mommy's heart is beating faster, Damn I must aint got a prayer at all/
Getting pulled away from the walls, pieces of my home is gone/
And I'm next, just because yall wasn't safer with sex/
I didn't ask for life, and now yall both just giving me death/
Dude I got hands and feet, plus I'm holding on, I'm not just tissue/
I guess my life's not even an issue, & i can't say that I'm gonna miss you/
Though its to late for me, I hope yall know that I was alive/
And with my last breath, I'm saying goodbye, and I hope yall rest in piss.


(CHORUS)
Now I lay me down to sleep,
I pray the lord my soul to keep/
If I should die before I wake,
I pray the lord my soul to take/

And if I get a chance at life,
I pray the lord to make it right/
And if I'm just a bastard,
Then I pray the lord to take my life/

AUDIO
http://www.myspace.com/thaloccster

 

[shirmstick]

that shit slaps. the beat is hard as fuck, im feelin it. damn hahaha though the subject matter is somethin i can relate to you feel me a few times you know, hahaha, for real though it gets crazy you feel me. im diggin it for real , that shit slaps cuz!

 

[Palmer]

The beat is okay, I'm definitely not liking the baby crying in the backgound or the females verse. Dude's (you?) verse was pretty solid though. Overall a pretty decent track IMO. Thanks.

 

[Tanqueray Loc]

The beat is okay, I'm definitely not liking the baby crying in the backgound or the females verse. Dude's (you?) verse was pretty solid though. Overall a pretty decent track IMO. Thanks.

that acutally was me on the whole song.... I just changed my voice, and the purpose for that was to (be the actual fetus) spitting a verse about how he feels from the inside.....

 

[Palmer]

that acutally was me on the whole song.... I just changed my voice, and the purpose for that was to (be the actual fetus) spitting a verse about how he feels from the inside.....

oops sorry bro...

*listens to song again...

Edit: Just got done listening to it a couple more times from start to finish. Actually it kept fucking up so I listened to the first half about 10 times. Anyway, man I have to apologize the song is fuckin dope. I actually added it to my playlist hopefully some of my friends listen to it. The only critisism i have is the baby crying. I can't stand it. Other then that the song is filthy. What did you do to make your voice sound like that. I turned it up real loud and I realized that it doesn't sound like a chick but more like quasimoto or something like that. I actually really enjoy that verse. Props bro.

Edit2: It keeps fucking up...WTF?

 

[Tanqueray Loc]

oops sorry bro...

*listens to song again...

Edit: Just got done listening to it a couple more times from start to finish. Actually it kept fucking up so I listened to the first half about 10 times. Anyway, man I have to apologize the song is fuckin dope. I actually added it to my playlist hopefully some of my friends listen to it. The only critisism i have is the baby crying. I can't stand it. Other then that the song is filthy. What did you do to make your voice sound like that. I turned it up real loud and I realized that it doesn't sound like a chick but more like quasimoto or something like that. I actually really enjoy that verse. Props bro.

Edit2: It keeps fucking up...WTF?

Yeah I actually should only have the baby crying in the hook or a small part somewhere in the song.... I record in digital performer 4.6 and it has this thing called spectural effects and it lets you change your voice.. it has 3 settings, pitch, tempo, and format

 

[Palmer]

Any chance you can try uploading it again? I've tried to play it at least 20 times and it's only made it through the whole song like 3 times. It keeps skipping or cutting off randomly.

 

[Hihlosis]

Solid track Tanq!