BUSINESS CARD

[LadyTragik]

TRYING TO DESIGN A BUSINESS CARD, BUT IM STUCK AS TO HOW I SHOULD PLACE MY PHOTOS ON THE BACK PART...I MADE A QUICK LITTLE COLLAGE BUT IT LOOKS WEIRD....ANY FEEDBACK WELCOME, THANKS

 

[Likwid]

Maybe some kind of border for the pics in the collage to make it look like you had a bunch of printed photos laying around? The layout of the front looks great as is.

 

[Married2daAve15]

i think the front consept is great. u could also, instead of having pics of yourself make it with samples of your work. And on the back have something simple like your name or website.. i think that would give it a more "professional" feel to it...the front look dope though...

 

[tosin]

the front is clean...id suggest changing the www.com font to something cleaner...

and i agree w/ leaving that white border you put on ya pics when ya post them on the collage...

 

[scraper707]

I suggest changing the website font, and changing the info font to, with it being so small, and it being a skinnier font, it might be hard to read, it isnt that readable at the size, so on a 2 by 3.5, it gonna be pretty hard to read.
and, one thing i notice was, the artist photographer teacher design, id put designer instead of design.

The back looks tight, except for that i noticed at the very bottom, you have a picture of a guy, but you cant even see him, just his eye, its the pic under the highrise wire thing, and i noticed that all the other pics are people, and that pic dont really go... so maybe another pic of a person, and maybe the one you already have down there under it....

 

[TRAJIK1]

i think the front looks good just use a couple different pics for the back

what do u teach?

 

[MOREBASS]

Am I trippin, or was it like a Perrywinkle/Purpleish color yesterday ? That one looked official ! Anyways...I like it...

 

[LadyTragik]

Im gunna try adding a white border to them

I suggest changing the website font, and changing the info font to, with it being so small, and it being a skinnier font, it might be hard to read, it isnt that readable at the size, so on a 2 by 3.5, it gonna be pretty hard to read.
and, one thing i notice was, the artist photographer teacher design, id put designer instead of design.

The back looks tight, except for that i noticed at the very bottom, you have a picture of a guy, but you cant even see him, just his eye, its the pic under the highrise wire thing, and i noticed that all the other pics are people, and that pic dont really go... so maybe another pic of a person, and maybe the one you already have down there under it....

thanks for the feedback, i will change all these

what do u teach?

Im the Program Coordinator for this thing called The DJ Project (www.TheDJProject.com)...teach kids in the mission district (SF) audio production, breakdancing, djing and business entrepreneurship. I teach the audio production/critical thinking class.

 

[fillyacup]

maybe no pics on the front, an collage on the back

 

[BayBoss420]

i like everything except for maybe the greyish color on the front, id experiment with differnt colors for that area, other then that theyre sick. gonna cost alot to print those tho...

 

[TONY206]

I don't have any suggestions for the back collage but the front looks great. You may want to try a "cleaner" font but I like it how it stands. Also, shouldn't it say "DESIGNER" instead of "DESIGN"? It threw me off immediately as I read it.

 

[Tycoonin]

I'd take the pix you got on the front and use that on the back or on the glossy side and keep your text side with all your info with out any pictures. Your card is your contact info and having your picture on there helps people remember who you are. Puts a face to the name. And the collage with all your photos is cool but your work is really good and i think youd rather have people check out your portfolio instead of judging your work from a 3x2 card. The detail in your work is what makes it great and the card aint good enough to show its full potential.

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