B/W Sporadic Designs Ad

[SPORADIC]

I'm running this ad in a magazine "The Inside Connection".
Available nationally across the nation.....

You know it gotta be B/W.I aint got no money for color......Yet!!!

 

[Chaos]

Thats put together real well, i think it looks good without color

 

[Big Teflon]

LOOKIN' GOOD.

 

[DK Graphikz]

hey can you promote albums covers of artists who didnt give you permission to use their photos??? esp if this magazine is going to be nationwide

 

[Swishersplitter]

hey can you promote albums covers of artists who didnt give you permission to use their photos??? esp if this magazine is going to be nationwide

That's a good question. You may need a disclaimer in the add about that. I'd check the legality of it before sending it to the press. Looks good tho, should get you some business.

 

[SPORADIC]

@dk gRAPHIKS.I thought about that long & hard.Some legal issues may come or they may not ut if they do.I'm not rich so they wont get anything......

I'm gonna throw a disclaimer on their like Swisher stated..Thanks for bringing that to my attention dog.....1

 

[ConnDemned]

the bottom text looks off, I'd center it up on the page more, and check your spacing after periods, it looks as if there is none. Also I'd probably only have your contact info on there once, besides the margin squeezing you have going on it looks pretty good... I'd give a bit more room around the edges. The "Specializing In:" text should be centered more in the box also, it's a bit low. Not trying to sound negative at all, but if you're gonna be printed in a mag. you should look your best.

 

[SPORADIC]

I feel you Conndemned,thanks for the quality feed.....1

 

[DARKMINDZ ENT.]

hot shyt homie you need to holla at me about label prices to do all my peoples cd its like 4 cd and promotion too

 

[SPORADIC]

hot shyt homie you need to holla at me about label prices to do all my peoples cd its like 4 cd and promotion too

Thats all you gotta do is get at me with a pm or Email

 

[Myzery99]

If you havent turned it in yet, I would suggest fixing these things:

On the Hellbound Records logo, I would center it inside the white box, because it looks off center.

On your contact info, I would move it a little more away from the edge, so that it doesnt have a chance of getting cut off.

On the bottom paragraph you might trying justifying the text so it all lines up.


Not trying to tell you how to do things or anything, but I thought I would let you know because I know that when other people look at my work they can see things wrong that I dont see.