Here's a copy of a song I just did tonight with some local cats, B.A. & Dez. The first guy is B.A. (kinda gettin' his Keek the Sneek on aranoid I have the 2nd verse, and I help on the hook...Dez is on 3rd. The song needs to be mixed down and intro & outro done. Please get at me with some feedback.
http://www.soundclick.com/veteransadministration
My verse is pretty much the same one I wrote for the battle with Furious32, just added some stuff and I deleted some stuff....let me know what you think.
Thanks for payin' attention.
LOL
Peace
http://www.soundclick.com/veteransadministration
My verse is pretty much the same one I wrote for the battle with Furious32, just added some stuff and I deleted some stuff....let me know what you think.
Thanks for payin' attention.
LOL
Peace
I don’t know the spot /
From where you came
So I’m touchin’ every town /
lettin’ these shots rain
Leavin’ them blood stains /
All over your fitted mane
Lyrical lacerations got you feelin’/
Nothin’ but pain
shatterin’ ya frame /
vocabulary in-sane
Syllable-ly gifted /
Spittin’ off of the brain
Get off of me mane /
nothing that you can do to me /
can compare to how I be /
Murderin’ ‘em brutally /
Emcees by the 2 and 3 /
I’m fuckin’ ‘em up /
Like a retarded butcher /
Is how I’m cuttin’ ‘em up
Enemies, like Idi Amin /
I’m eatin’ ‘em up
Performin’ lyrical surgery, boy /
Su-per stuck
Off heem and yerp /
super soaker in the trunk, yea /
ready to squirt
squeezin’ ‘til it’s empty, mane /
yea, wettin’ ya shirt
Leavin’ ‘em hurt /
the hardest artist on the turf /
You nerds are softer than nerfs
C'mon!!
From where you came
So I’m touchin’ every town /
lettin’ these shots rain
Leavin’ them blood stains /
All over your fitted mane
Lyrical lacerations got you feelin’/
Nothin’ but pain
shatterin’ ya frame /
vocabulary in-sane
Syllable-ly gifted /
Spittin’ off of the brain
Get off of me mane /
nothing that you can do to me /
can compare to how I be /
Murderin’ ‘em brutally /
Emcees by the 2 and 3 /
I’m fuckin’ ‘em up /
Like a retarded butcher /
Is how I’m cuttin’ ‘em up
Enemies, like Idi Amin /
I’m eatin’ ‘em up
Performin’ lyrical surgery, boy /
Su-per stuck
Off heem and yerp /
super soaker in the trunk, yea /
ready to squirt
squeezin’ ‘til it’s empty, mane /
yea, wettin’ ya shirt
Leavin’ ‘em hurt /
the hardest artist on the turf /
You nerds are softer than nerfs
C'mon!!