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Aug 28, 2002
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Another attempt at finding my poetic side...Leave some feedback, later...



I carry a sadness corresponding with chapters to my afterlife
Breaking all the bonding's that seal, express tears insead'a laughter
[You're not well] I'm afraid that your right, despite any joy I get from you
Strife seem's to find it's way upon me, and my mind's cluttered with darkness
My silhouette is standing but I've fallen, it's amazing what 151 & rum can do
[What's become of you] I've tryed to persue happyness, but found solitude
I enjoy those quiet moment's before the storm, and the rain gets the best of me
It's like I can see you right there buthow do i cope when you took the rest of me