Advice for this CD cover im doin..

[GTDProductions]

should i just start a new one..im missin a person on the side of me..but this the start..

yall got any advice for this cover? im not sure what else to do..i want the text to be clean tho..but let me kno what you would do to change or improve the image..

 

[TRAJIK1]

take that purple out and different text and try a border

 

[TRAJIK1]

amd dude in white looks outta place

 

[GTDProductions]

aight..

 

[Married2daAve15]

yea the dude in white has too much shadow on his shirt (his right arm)... it keeps pullin my eye to that dark spot...

 

[City Situation]

yeah cut down on the lighting on his arm. it looks like you kinda tried to make him look like he's in the shadow of the other guy. for some reason i think it's too much.

and i think you should try something bigger with the text, to take up more space. something just feels off about it.

 

[Toro]

Too much space on top, and fix the guy's shoulder would help it.

 

[GTDProductions]

yea i think ill try what yall said..i think it looks off cause i still dont got a good image of shadow loc for the left side of me..

 

[BGN79]

why pink

 

[GTDProductions]

why not? pink a faggot color or somthing?

 

[DankedOut707]

why not? pink a faggot color or somthing?

YES. LOL AND IT LOOKS LIKE THERES PURPLE ON THERE TOO, THAT MAKES EVEN MORE "GAYER LOOKING". IT LOOKS LIKE IT GOT POTENTIAL THOUGH

 

[GTDProductions]

aight ill see what i can do..seems like it got more work..the text aint lookin right neither.

 

[iTziLLDREW]

looks suspect

 

[GTDProductions]

yall crazy. aight ill make the shit different.

 

[gravedigger]

i say just make the artist bigger and lower the text. or maybe warp the text and change the font.

 

[GTDProductions]

yea i was funkin wit it today a for a mintue..the bigger text looks str8 but and i changed the color skeem abit..still aint satisfied after i see all these album covers these pros are doin..

 

[TRAJIK1]

post the update

 

[GTDProductions]

aight.

 

[GTDProductions]

Before.

After.

 

[Pak Dan]

not too bad