My two cents
Ok i thought i'd add on my opinions on the track.
The beat is cool, i hope you plan to clear the sample
, but about the only thing i can be critical about as far as the beat is that it doesn't really ever change up. It stays the same throughout the track and it never really varies all that much. Its still a decent beat though.
I dig the hook on it. Real smooth and well performed. Matches up with the beat real well.
I'm really diggin your flow and style. Voice is real nice on the track. But something about the vocals just doesn't hit my ear all the way right and i'm not sure what it is. If it’s just the flow and the beat don't really go hand in hand or if you aren't spittin over the beat consistently and changing up the flow. But regardless of that i like it.
Lyrics are cool and so is your word play. String words together well and emphasize parts of words good.
Sorry if i seem negative, i'm just offering up some constructive criticism and my opinions on the track. Sometimes it is easier for me to point out the little things to improve than it is for me to say all the stuff i like about a song.
Over all though i say this is a nice track and really makes me wanna look into some more of your music in the future. Keep up the hard work. I wanna hear some more.