A Sample Of A Song

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

Just trying to get things moving in here.. It's called 'Shitlist.'

First verse and the hook.

http://www.zshare.net/audio/106147697fcefba5/


And yes Youngnutt, it's weak. Thanks.

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

TSSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAA PRETTY SICK HYOMIE

 

[Defy]

lyrics were fresh.....the words in the hook were coo but your cadence is off....and the way you doubled it up made it way off key.....besides that it was raw....nice beat too

 

[Calm 1 NPK 503]

That was nice

 

[FATAL NYGHTMARE]

The hook is actually more than doubled.. There's 5 layers. I know it needs to be edited, I'm just too lazy to do it at the moment. I think it sounds good seeing as how I haven't done any editing, yet.

Thanks for the feed homie.

 

[Defy]

^yeah, then one of those 5 layers is off key, it just throws it off....your hook, the style has to be impeccuous, and your delivery gotta be impregnable......lol, sorry I was listening to mike tyson.....