A 16 I laid down

[Defy]

Chree wanted me to get on a track so this is what I spit. I got the audio somewhere, but he needs to re-do the hook.


I'm a city rich pit bull and I ain't scared of you poodles
blowin weed by the O's and yes I got oodles
I get it like the song bout the soup chicken noodle
henny on the side, piece sign, bitch, toodles
I'm gone, go dumb act a fo-ol
if you searching for a captain bitch you better try google
cuz a hoe couldn't get two bills to spend on the dollar menu
I'll send you to the track not back to scho-ol
cuz you're dealing with someone who will
make a quick phone, people run up on y'all and have you killed
watch frozen like it stood still
the block stay poppin every day like a birth control pill
and my corner, that's the real attraction
we do donuts till there's no more wheel traction
cuz we 3 are the cleanest faction
in the golden state since coach nellie, bd & stephen jackson

 

[Stealth]

Post up the audio...good shit. I wanna see how you made some of that shit rhyme.

 

[Defy]

I think chree was gonna fix the hook, but I'll post it when its ready

 

[Likwid Eyece]

cool shit but yeah struggling to see how fo-ol and google rhyme... hit up that audio soon g... keen for a listen

 

[Defy]

here:

http://www.zshare.net/audio/9165374f8473be/


just my vocals, no hook, no effects


I don't like the way my voice sounds anyways, so I doubled up on it and now that I'm listening to it again I don't really like that either.....I've just never liked my voice when I'm hearing it on shit, even the answer machine

 

[VERSACERO]

It's pretty tight

 

[Defy]

^good lookin

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

TSSSSSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAAAAAAA WELL WELL WELL... TSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAAAA LETS SEE, IT WAS AIGHT, BUT THAT STYLE IS AND FLOW IS SATURATED

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

AND ATLEAST IT WAS ON BEAT

 

[Defy]

TSSSSSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAAAAAAA WELL WELL WELL... TSSSSSSSSS HAAAAAAAAA LETS SEE, IT WAS AIGHT, BUT THAT STYLE IS AND FLOW IS SATURATED

good lookin on the feedback lee, but I don't understand what you mean by it being saturated. could you be a bit more specific? criticism always helps development.

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

WHAT I MEAN IS EVERY NEW RAPPER OR EVERYBODY SOUNDS EXACTLY THE SAME WITH THAT FLOW, WHETHER IT'S FROM THE WEST OR EAST COAST IT JUST SOUNDS PLAIN

 

[Defy]

^aight, fasho

 

[DankedOut707]

LOL DONT QUIT YOUR DAY JOB

 

[Defy]

^LOL, you don't think I could be the next Skee-lo? Paperboy? Soulja boy? just like all them I'm a lyrical beast!


I write for fun, I don't expect shit to come from it, although I would like to sell some beats.

and btw, TOODLES = GANGSTA

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

YOU COULD BE THE NEXT LIL DANIMAL

 

[Defy]

at first I thought it was constructive criticism, but now I see its just shit talking. I ain't mad, I didn't put effort into this, and you are the "almighty leezilla" :eyecross: so I guess I can be little dipper jr!

 

[LEE-ZILLA 69]

TSSSSSS HAAA WHEN DID THE BIGG LEE EVER TALK SHIT? DON'T TAKE IT TO THE HEART THE LIL DANIMAL THING WAS A JOKE

 

[Defy]

lol....alrighty then lee

 

[BETO916]

look@'em!! hahaha

good shit mane

 

[Solitary 1]

SHIT WAS CLEAN!