2pac - rhymes never die

[silver14209]

did for fun, check it at the bottom

 

[SPORADIC]

Pac should've been the focus point of this piece..Thats where its lacking..Pac has got 2 big bigger....The bottom text coulda been a darker color for readability.......Top text is cool....

 

[silver14209]

*edit*

 

[Siccx Degree]

It'd look better if you got rid of the glow around him...

 

[chris capo]

i think it look better if he was centered like in the first one but bigger naw i think the glowing is pretty coo

 

[KODOGG]

He need's to be centered more and maybe a difrent text for the "Rhymes Never Die" cuz it's pretty hard 2 read.

 

[silver14209]

i just put him there because it looks like he is on the path.

edit* there. is his coat ok?

 

[KODOGG]

That's pretty clean i'd like to see it in a size that a CD could be printed out in.. it gives me to much of a poster feeling right there.. But it's clean i noticed how he's walkin the path that's coo'.. good work.

 

[H. HEATED]

decent

 

[silver14209]

thanks, but i still, on a personal level, feel its crap. so yes, that means you guys will see me constantly updating it. so keep coming through and dropping criticizm

 

[KODOGG]

I aint feelin the featuring.. need 2 be smaller in way up in the corner so it dosnt take away from the backround to much..

 

[Big Teflon]

WHERE'D IT GO?

 

[silver14209]

right here b.tef

ill get at that, trying to make shit close to perfect as humanly possible for a beginer

 

[SPORADIC]

Listen,PAC GOTTA BE THE FOCUS!!! No need to drop the opacity on him...In the background in the sky...You should add some pac text to compliment the title...Also,he should be centered (and maybe a lil bigger.Bring the titles text down to the bottom below him (if you decide to center him) and add the feature text below the title text...Lift the contrast on the background...

 

[silver14209]

ok SPORADIC, ima follow what you said. stay tuned....

 

[Dyablo]

Yea I agree with Sporadic, Pac shouldnt blend in with the background he should standout, and the text should stand out as well, i aint feelin the red on red :chinese: good concept

 

[silver14209]

work in progress

 

[xNizzLex]

looks better but the rhymes never die text needs work...keep at it tho

 

[KODOGG]

Yea maybe make the "Ryhmes Never Die" more readable and maybe drop it down ot the bottom.