May 6th @ 106.1 KMEL meeting reviews Ugly Nigga's STALKER

[The Bay Area]

On Feb 4th...Ugly Nigga had a meeting with 106.1 KMEL and they said that he needed to create a song that was fresh new and exciting...not done before and get online activity for awarness...the next meeting is scheduled for May 6th so in that time Ugly Nigga created the sexually charged club song STALKER.

This is a pre version of Ugly Nigga's...sexually charged club song...STALKER....produced by Indecent The Slapmaster...the song is a spin off of Ugly Nigga's....STALKER STORIES...with adult female content which is now at 31 episodes...moving up to 100 short stories.

The STALKER STORIES was created to attract a female fan base to the aggressive sexual concept the of STALKER as advertisement for the introduction to the music...so Ugly Nigga set out with making a list of 100 of the women he would stalk off of his Facebook page (each woman being stalked and sexually conquered by the STALKER aka Ugly Nigga)...as the women signed on to be part of this fantasy world the female STALKER shirts were made for the growing fan base...the collection of short stories will be published as a whole, in book form...the STALKER video is due for production in mid May...the STALKER TOUR consists of 7 cities: San Jose, San Leandro, Oakland, San Francisco, Sacramento, Stockton and Modesto...we may be adding L.A., Reno and Vegas.

Check out the 100 women who signed on to become...#teamstalker on
Facebook

STALKER STORY episode #19 "Heaven's Gate Pt1 of 2" with adult female content.
HEAVEN'S GATE:... | Facebook

 

[Dirt E. Needlez]

that chorus is horrible gibberish and not very catchy, but this is better than some of your other music. good luck getting it on KMEL, but then again, KMEL plays some pretty wack music lately so you stand a chance at looking like the shiniest turd in the toilet.

and those stories need some SERIOUS editing man, your punctuation (you cant use "...." in between every line) and grammar make it hard to read, and it comes off as a knockoff "50 shades of gray"...but that may be exactly what you are going for. I would suggest taking your writings to someone who can help you improve those areas, otherwise they read like some kind of ramblings from a registered sex offender off his meds.

With the amount of content you say you have, perhaps you should invest in improving the quality of your overall product and possibly condensing the writings to focus more on the key points. A basic creative writing class would help you keep your story on track and help you paint a better picture. Because after reading the entire story I'm still not sure what the hell I just read except it was odd, and not in a good way...just kind of confusing.


Best of luck to you and your endeavors in music and beyond.

 

[The Bay Area]

I just use (...) for the time being...I know I'll have to edit it when it comes time to publishing a book. I never read "50 Shades of Gray" and wasn't thinking of it until after the women started mentioning it. I still haven't read her stuff so I wont be influenced by her work. The stories were just for the hell of it...just to advertise the song...until the women started taking it serious...yeah I took creative writing coarse for 2 semesters it was cool and thanks for the input.

 

[Hood Rat Matt]

I took creative writing coarse

I took a creative writing fine

 

[The Bay Area]

I took a creative writing fine

Lol...just being creative.

 

[Hood Rat Matt]

luck to u bro. I know u catch a lot of shit on here but u seem like a good guy and a hard worker

 

[The Bay Area]

luck to u bro. I know u catch a lot of shit on here but u seem like a good guy and a hard worker

Maaan...I like Siccness.net because a lot of these cats be tellin' me Ugly Nigga you suck...Ugly Nigga you can't rap for shit...Ugly Nigga your graphics look like garbage (last one might be true lol)...but I make it work...so it's fun.

 

[Snakegang]

that chorus is horrible gibberish and not very catchy, but this is better than some of your other music. good luck getting it on KMEL, but then again, KMEL plays some pretty wack music lately so you stand a chance at looking like the shiniest turd in the toilet.

and those stories need some SERIOUS editing man, your punctuation (you cant use "...." in between every line) and grammar make it hard to read, and it comes off as a knockoff "50 shades of gray"...but that may be exactly what you are going for. I would suggest taking your writings to someone who can help you improve those areas, otherwise they read like some kind of ramblings from a registered sex offender off his meds.

With the amount of content you say you have, perhaps you should invest in improving the quality of your overall product and possibly condensing the writings to focus more on the key points. A basic creative writing class would help you keep your story on track and help you paint a better picture. Because after reading the entire story I'm still not sure what the hell I just read except it was odd, and not in a good way...just kind of confusing.


Best of luck to you and your endeavors in music and beyond.

Everything he said. But yeah, basically you are obviously driven and have some decent ideas, so I can't knock it at all. I even think the name "Ugly Nigga" is pretty funny and sets you apart. Next time you're out dropping off fliers stop by a couple community colleges and find a graphic designer that's into rap and any sort of writing/English student and see if they'll help you clean and polish your writing and do design for you. There are tons of people that would do this just to have their names on something and for the experience. Because honestly, your graphic design scares me away from ever even giving your songs a chance and your grammar and spelling in that story was horrendous.

Like someone else said, you seem like a good dude and you seem to actually accept and ask for constructive criticism and not call everyone fags and haters. So best of luck Mr Ugly Nigga.

 

[Snakegang]

The whole "Stalker" concept comes across pretty rapey and creepy to me, but the girls on you facebook seem to like it, so hey, whatever I guess.

 

[The Bay Area]

Everything he said. But yeah, basically you are obviously driven and have some decent ideas, so I can't knock it at all. I even think the name "Ugly Nigga" is pretty funny and sets you apart. Next time you're out dropping off fliers stop by a couple community colleges and find a graphic designer that's into rap and any sort of writing/English student and see if they'll help you clean and polish your writing and do design for you. There are tons of people that would do this just to have their names on something and for the experience. Because honestly, your graphic design scares me away from ever even giving your songs a chance and your grammar and spelling in that story was horrendous.

Like someone else said, you seem like a good dude and you seem to actually accept and ask for constructive criticism and not call everyone fags and haters. So best of luck Mr Ugly Nigga.

Lol...how many rappers say "Hey...I need to go out and get a female fan base." Then actually set forth with a plan to do it? This whole STALKER thing is directed to them and for them...the female t-shirts, hoodies, leggings, and sweats because they buy all that shit...dudes don't spend money like women. Even if 106.1 KMEL don't ride with the song I will still push it to the club Djs and purchase the radio commercials and cable commercials...the music video should jell it together. As far as the writing goes I'm just building the platform...I'll have other writers come on board and continue...I don't want to spread myself to thin. I think the beat is sick and the lyrics are better than a lot of the ass songs on the radio currently...the hook to me is up in question...but I'll find out when I start pushing it to the club dj's. As it stands the online t-shirts sell and that's just off Facebook.