My Soul (Please Give Feedback)

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Nov 17, 2004
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[Chorus]
This my soul...take it for what its worth,
as long as I'm on this earth, I'll live this shit for better or for worse/
don't judge a book by its cover but by the pages and how i use it/
my heart and my soul comin out in my music/

[Verse 1]
I'm usin' every lifeline, I put my life on the line/
Never put out a flat line yet no flow sicker than mine/
I hear every aspect of beats, I dissect every line/
The feeling of everything, I break down every rhyme/
The meaning of each word, the flow of each verse/
which verse should go last, and which should come first/
Rap is forever in my heart, even when shit gets worse/
as you can see it's part of me till I am part of this earth/
Rappin to me is a necessity like H-2-O/
Some only in it for tha dough but I'm in it to let go/
yeah money's nice but nothing can surpass the high I know/
No experience can top, or even touch my flow/
When I'm concocting my songs, I hold total control/
I'm doing everything I can, to achieve my goal/
it ain't just a part of me, but my life as a whole/
the devil can take my life...but he can never take my soul/

[Chorus]

all i've written so far, Feedback please!!!!!
 
Dec 29, 2004
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shit like this


inside my body is the soul of a psycho/
warrior destroying enemies like reiko/
mic flow is a hobby of mine/
then harold jumps the barrel and i'm pullin double time/
i'm scitzophrenic manic in a panic/
alter ego's got my shit going stright out of planning/
it's get deeper I try to dig up out the hole/
but my body lost control god please give me back my soul

stuff like that