Would love your opinions.........

[mr. bilistic]

This is the first song me and bri-j(from the group 3 a.m.) have completed. We are doing an entire album together. And I finally got my own proffessional studio (I've had it about 2 months now, finally think I got everything down, wo we started recording) The whole album is going to be recorded and mixed by me, and I'd just like ya'lls thoughts on how I'm starting it off. Let me know what you think of the song, and how the levels sound to you. The song is called "trapped" and it's at http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/bilisticmusic.htm

 

[CARLOS ROSSI]

Aye iz that tha same 3 AM That Hogglife was supposed to put out??? were are they from folkz???


I'mma peep them traccs in a min and give feedback!

 

[mr. bilistic]

no, this is 3 am from kansas

 

[jay deuce]

I'm feelin that song. The hook is good. Sometimes the 2nd guy gets a lil too fast with his flow and you cant really get the feel of the song but its still nice.

 

[PAPAUPTON]

I DONT LIKE IT BUT IT SOUNDS LIKE A LOT OF CATS WOULD DIG IT. BUT THE HOOK IS ILL

 

[mr. bilistic]

there is no 2nd guy, i'm the only one rapping. bri-j is doing the singing. thanks for your feedback. levels good?

 

[mr. bilistic]

up........

 

[ATF]

Its alright...keep doin your thing bilistic...

 

[mr. bilistic]

can u get a little more in depth? lol what u been up to homey?

 

[jay deuce]

The only thing I don't like about your flow on that track is you dont accent many words. Everything is said in the same tone really. Sounds a little rushed or somethin I know it's your style and it's no where near bad. It's just somethin that you could grow with. It's still a tight track.

I tried to explain what I felt the best way I could sorry if it sounds retarded.

Does anyone feel what I'm sayin?