tell me what ya think, keep it real

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Sep 10, 2002
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this is just a flow i made and i would like for ya to tell me what cha think, keep it real, aint no battle or at no one..521

I've Lived most of life alone, home away from home,
tryin ta figure family, and who was of my own,type of kind,
stuck in ah bind, tryin ta free myself, and cross tha line,
Reachin foe ah hand that wouldnt reach back,
lookin foe my mother, but all i see is a shadow of black,
no numbers to contact, young and facin tha fact,
gotta keep goin and no time ta look back,
makin ah decision, never quittin no matter time or position
life sentence, steady repentin livin independent,
could it be survival in my blood or thoughts of sucidal fuckin me up
got me drinkin ah cup, smokin ah blunt,
not knowin wit thiz life and were ima end up,
feelin like im on a one way road, family die'n now and
before i was born, all ive been shown,
gotta get in tha game and take control, my mother died when i was ten months old, i often talk to her when i feel tha room get cold, lookin foe love to not feel alone............521
 

Bone

Sicc OG
Jul 11, 2002
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I notice the potential in that. You got deep & it was "real" The tight thing about this piece is its you not a style. Like Chaos said its poetic

1 (521)
 
Jan 21, 2003
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I been starin at death everysince i was livin youth
shit that you speak mr 521 aint nuthin but the truth
aint got shit to prove
cause tha shit you speak is proof
you dont front
your pain is bigger than a computer font
my toughts are feelin up my head
when i sit alone in ma bed
tryinna stay calm
i also reach fo a palm
your mom's 521 lives deep
watchin out fo you while you sleep
like the g that i am
ill keep a candle light up
is all part of the deal
cause i show much respect fo a nigga who spittin shit fo real
 
Sep 10, 2002
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#7
thankz....

chaos i feel you but its ah flow, somethin i wanna use later, but thankz and to bone itz all to tha good folkz and thankz for understandin tha realness real, to my nigg L.k.d. thankz for tha flo

I feel My nigga L.k.D
and when i get back to tha S-A-C
Ima let all know that we bay Area kingz,
Stackin cream, holdin triple beamz, in ah
cutt supreme, wit ah mugg on mean, and ah gansta lean,
on bitch niggaz we unload hollow tip magazines,
posted on blockz servin fiendz, no evidence foe ah murda scene.
650 & tha 916, like 3x stackin chipz,
got police mad cuz we dont fit tha discrip,
major known on how we represent,
ill take tha m-16 with tha M-4, and problems wit L.K.D
niggaz goin want no more,
forever strapped, and if you need 521
i got ya back ready ta go to War........

get at me LKD, and dissciple211 thankz, keep it real and do tha damn thang, and if any of ya'll need some new in ya click dont be afraid ta give 521 ah hit