Lose some of the flares. Switch up that font too. Theres alot of empty black space at the bottom. The text is a little over done. It's outlined, and has texture on it. the font is also two different colors that don't mesh well. imo
I agree though it looks like it has very good potential.
I really like the backround image. The perspective on it is pretty sav.
Your gettin pretty good man.