Opinions?

[mr. bilistic]

I just finished a new song called "it's you" which I think is gonna be the single I really push cause I truly think it could be huge on the radio, but I'd like everyones opinion on it. see what ya'll think.
http://www.soundclick.com/pro/default.cfm?BandID=203389&content=music

 

[mr. bilistic]

up..........

 

[marcus]

i would pick another song, this shit isn't appealing enough and won't make much of an impact.

 

[TKO]

I'm not feelin it.....song sounds too simple...the beats not hittin...this song won't make it into rotation on any big radio stations IMO.

 

[mr. bilistic]

damn, for real? are u guys listening to "It's you"? that beat is off the chain. dunno, difference of styles I guess. Thanks for the feedbck though

 

[kaoz206]

The beat doesn't knock like it should, and doesn't have enough of that mainstream feel. You start bustin right out the gate which doesn't give the audience any chance to hardly soak it.... Plus you cut to the hook real quick without even spittin 16 bars. Not to mention the instruments (guitar and saxophone) are misused and don't come in at the right times. Just think your goin head up against the heavyweights of the industry fightin for those limited spots on the radio, what makes this track a head above the rest?

Honest criticism......

 

[jay deuce]

I'm diggin the chorus and your flow sounds a lot better than some of your other stuff I have heard in the past BUT somethin just ain't right with it.

The Saxophone is definatley out of place, maybe it's just too loud.

It's definatley not bad.

 

[R0YALTY]

raps & hooks r coo.... u shouldnt have come in that fast...let the beat ride....the beat sounds low budget

 

[mr. bilistic]

not rapping 16 bars and bringing the hook in is actually a smart thing, the hook is what makes a song (commercially) if it is catchy and gets the people singing it over and over that's what creates a hit.(again, commercially, of course I don't agree with this fully, but that's how it goes) the beat is definitely not low budget, but I respect everyones opinion and want nothing but honest feedback, so thank u very much.