new song i recorded last week
- Thread starter Artistic
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just a little piece of advice: people dont wanna download some shit from somebody they never heard of. zshare lets you listen to whats posted without downloading though, maybe youd get more feedback that way. as for the song, you jacked a beat and rhymed over it, so its not entirely new. its not as bad as tadou or bolamac and cheese, thats about all I can say. heres the link you want people to preview
http://www.zshare.net/audio/66523581e510b6db/
http://www.zshare.net/audio/66523581e510b6db/
Like I said before I like your flow, you can tell you are seasoned so you got that to work with.
If I can give you some contructive critisism, I think your lyrics sound a bit selfish. I think with the game the way it is now and what you want out of it, its gonna be hard to come up. We see so many new and creative things but alot of mainstream crap/mass produced garbage and negative shit.
Rappers have taken new and old trends and alot of shit we hear is negative, either disses or talking about killing people ect. ect. political angles, so called freestyles, gimmicks ect. ect. that do nothing but hurt and misguide the youth. Most of everything has been done before and I'm not saying you should get a gimmick, I'm saying I think you need to figure out what you really want from hip hop, even if you do, re asses it and keep building on it.
What hip hop doesn't need is anymore lil weezy, kanye garbage, but more positive shit.
So in saying that, if you went with staying positive and unselfish, something to try and lift peoples spirits, bring people closer, you might find what you are looking for..
It is what it is, do your thing, you got a good flow and I don't think anyone here would disagree.
Keep at it.
If I can give you some contructive critisism, I think your lyrics sound a bit selfish. I think with the game the way it is now and what you want out of it, its gonna be hard to come up. We see so many new and creative things but alot of mainstream crap/mass produced garbage and negative shit.
Rappers have taken new and old trends and alot of shit we hear is negative, either disses or talking about killing people ect. ect. political angles, so called freestyles, gimmicks ect. ect. that do nothing but hurt and misguide the youth. Most of everything has been done before and I'm not saying you should get a gimmick, I'm saying I think you need to figure out what you really want from hip hop, even if you do, re asses it and keep building on it.
What hip hop doesn't need is anymore lil weezy, kanye garbage, but more positive shit.
So in saying that, if you went with staying positive and unselfish, something to try and lift peoples spirits, bring people closer, you might find what you are looking for..
It is what it is, do your thing, you got a good flow and I don't think anyone here would disagree.
Keep at it.