The chorus go on for way to long at the beginning.....IMO the content of the song is following along the lines of whats already out there.I started on a song yesterday where the content was simuliar and I had to start over writing cuz I was displeased on how I was writing what everyone else is writing about.I know for myself im tired of writing about weed,scrapers,pills,hyphy,drinking,kickin it....stuff like that.I have so much more to say and I want to convey myself,who I am and what im about and following what everyone else is doing dont seperate me from the others......Im versatyle over any type beat.What's goin on is producers aint making me beats that motivate me to talk about what I want to talk about in these songs.So like myself at times they also fall into the follow the sound of the times trap and only provoke me to talk about club shit or street shit.Im made of much more than that........On another note I like the beat to that song you made.....just for me right now in my life im starting to be real big on content.