It's not bad. You could definately use some different drum and bass sounds. The 808 clap has got to go... It seems like it's missing something though. Try dropping some rhodes type chords in there. I hate to sound like a dick, but please don't post in every board when you make a new beat. People will probably be less likely to check your future work if they see you're always spamming the boards.
-=bumpus=-