Flow, bout to go on my demo.. let me know what you think..

[Greg Double]

whos the one to kick a fuckin rap jam like a slap from a back hand? and who be spittin lyrics even quicker than scat man?/ like jumpin jack flash with fat scam, up out the trash can/ with a mic in his hand yo just call me rap-man/

thats rite im well known and im in total control, fresh out a hole im comin up/ got my eyes out for the patrols, and suckas gunnin runnin up, let it go then i cock and reload/ goin toe to toe with most foes who boastin they flows are so cold.. my one goals to grab hold, and get a million records sold/ hustle to connect the cash flow to my wallet when i pass go/ i grab it like a lasso while suckas blow it outta theyre ass-hole/ im goin international these raps i gotta passion for, like titans when we clashin ill be the last man standin/ demandin like the last of the dragons with dickies saggin/ when its time to go.. ill be out in 84 all black monte carlo/
mashin hard on the boulevard smashin on the 5.0, layin low, duckin popos sucka roll slow cuz doin times a mutha fuckin no no we out for sho tho, hoppin up and down like we a mutha fuckin yo yo/ comin tite all nite because im never out of breath and i always ive got more rhymes to flow,just like a cat got nine lives im bustin dimes up on a live mic/ so i shine bright with no lights,
rappin outta tac town my whole life/and this track is critical, cuz how we spit it, and if its tough you know we did it/ hit the swish after we split it, smoke that one hitter then you gotta quit it/ blunts custom fitted to my lip, i hit it..
done alot of grimey shit admitted, never caught up in a single spot i been in/im keepin score and Double G is winnin,
even tho this just the beginnin..of illin and chillin judt sippin gin like a villian checkin paper with the skill and i just cant quit..
gotta spit like im a 50 round banana clip/ comin from the hip with this automatic platinum shit/ the raps legit blue nose records set the standard for spits/ cuz we relentless about our business,
blowin out competition, dont leave a single bitch as witness and all the pigs come up missin/ cuz stakin chips is the mission now is you listenin? these are my words and i cant stop ive gotta get to the top/ before i drop but untill then ill be evadin the cops/ runnin the block with 2 glocks and zip, holdin stock so everyone waitin for me to slip/ and trip but you be out yo mind to test-me/
i got homies that will snipe yo ass like wesley, and put a bullet hole rite where yo vest-be/ when you fuckin wit the best-g'z its better to impress-me/

 

[CURT B]

most of it was ill but some of it had simple rhymes that could be worked on if u want to..overall its cool...6/10

 

[Greg Double]

yeah for sho thanks dogg, you prolly talkin bout the popo roll slow no no and like a yoyo shit..

i agree, but i was drunk when i wrote that part, and i just havent rewritten that shit yet.. the whole flow is in progress.. i also forgot to add some words in.. me and suspect tryin to put out this demo ep.. we lookin for input from ever angle.. so yeah for sho mayne.. thanks for the feedback.. paece!

 

[SlangsumLangsam]

man this was a damn sicc verse, i like how it all flows together hella quickly with tha multies and shit, agreeing with curt b on tha simple rhyme part, but i rhyme simple also, so i think it was down as fucc

 

[Greg Double]

thanx man... good lookin, im tryin to get my shit together and make some actual trax.. i got madd unfinished beats, verse fragments and hook ideas, so ima hit the siccness with my shit in the semi near future..

paece! out

 

[Suspect]

i remember this shit i like it we just need to a couples verses and sow up this track but shit man i'll hit you up later i'm out...1

 

[tank locc]

it seems pretty tight, but if u puttin it on wax, dont spit if it aint real, cuz i see alot of gun/killin talk....not sayin that aint real to u, but ive seen that mistake one to many times when people drop thier first shit

 

[Greg Double]

thanx i feel you dood.. but i aint even say that much

and suckas gunnin runnin up, let it go then i cock and reload/ goin toe to toe with most foes who boastin they flows are so cold..

and homies like wesley snipin, and that thru yo vest line, but yeah, good lookin man.. you know when you write a flow in like 3 sessions and be in different moods each time? thats how i be..

paece! out