FeedBack on a track!

[Meal Ticket]

What's up yall?! I recorded this track about 2 weeks ago and wanted your opinion.Good or Bad! Click on the soundclick link below. Thanks in advance!

"Tasty Like Pastries" by Meal Ticket
Produced by L7

 

[Frisco playa]

that song is tight. The hook is alright, but the flows are on point. Im feelin it overall.

 

[AwolSoldier]

Lyric's-.......................... FIRE! 9/10
Flow.Delivery-................. FIRE! 9/10
Hook- eeehhh!................ Borin! 5/10
Production- Not feelin it!........... 5/10

Stay mashin!

 

[Meal Ticket]

Thanks for the feedback yall!!!!!

 

[707_SAV]

Lyric's-.......................... FIRE! 9/10
Flow.Delivery-................. FIRE! 9/10
Hook- eeehhh!................ Borin! 5/10
Production- Not feelin it!........... 5/10

Stay mashin!

I agree.

The second track was tight lyrically too.

 

[Meal Ticket]

Fahow!!Thanks folks!

 

[Cante-up]

The flow is hard really hard/but the prod is weak.

 

[Meal Ticket]

I really appreciate the feedback yall!!!! 1.

 

[HERESY]

^^^ Who did those beats?


:hgk:

 

[lvpimp666]

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wat up mael ticket i think those song aint too hott i wouldnt buy even for a dollar

 

[DubbC415]

like it was said before, flow is on point...not really feelin the hook, but its not that bad...beat isnt too bad either, but its kinda annoying to me...pretty tight tho, nice job.

 

[Meal Ticket]

wat up mael ticket i think those song aint too hott i wouldnt buy even for a dollar

Some have honest opinions ,the rest like to hate! But thanks for taking time out to hear my music!!!

 

[Meal Ticket]

like it was said before, flow is on point...not really feelin the hook, but its not that bad...beat isnt too bad either, but its kinda annoying to me...pretty tight tho, nice job.

Thanks for the feedback folks!

 

[Meal Ticket]

^^^ Who did those beats?


:hgk:

This cat named L7 produced the tasty like pastrie track...the other 2 my folks Fo-Twen produced.

 

[AwolSoldier]

wat up mael ticket i think those song aint too hott i wouldnt buy even for a dollar

Who the fu*k is this clown.........come on! Theres feedback and hatin, now what you just posted was str8 hate....as artist we all need feedback to better our skillz positive and negative, next time you even post your opinion make sure its contructive.............why mention "i wouldn't even buy it for a doller"........thats not helpin out the artist, that just let people know yur a fu*kin hater....

@Meal ticket -fu*k this clown, but you dont need me to tell you that...stay mashin folkz!

SH

 

[Meal Ticket]

^^^^ Fashow cuzo...I get that shit alot so I'm used to it....I like to let my music do the talking.U keep grindin too!! 1.