Lyrics good. I agree the hook is kinda corny.
Video ok.
My problem with the video: If your doing a low budget flick, you should do something different than what people do in high budget flicks. With the exception of that one street scene where the whole crowd is gettin hyphy as fuck, this look like every other rap video, and people would rather see a high budget video with more club scenes and hoes than the low budget video with club scenes and hoes.