D/L link: My Bone Thugs flow CHECK THIS OUT!

[numba1assassin]

Peep the track called "Crossed the Line" this is a first attempt by me so I'd like some feedback.

MP3 Download link:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/downloadSong.cfm?ID=2339337

MP3 Stream Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/streamM3U.m3u?ID=2339337&q=Hi

Soundclick link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/8/randomsoundsrap_music.htm