The street actually is easier to read..its just when you convert to jpg it made it darker for some reason. It was actually darker so I lightened it up..but its the conversion to jpg. Why don't you like the 2 fonts together? What do you think would look better for the second??
I like conceptual covers myself and i don't see what the picture of them standing there has to do with street credibility. I like the picture to tie into the theme of the cover.