can yall give me some feedback on this song

[Damize-Clicc]

can i get some feedback yall? this is a song im workin on,its pretty much basic! but i would like too get people opinions on it...the full song will be up soon...good or bad i can take the critism...thanx



song is "untitled"

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[Damize-Clicc]

i added the full verse just now...let me know wha yall think...