good
the smoke
bad
misplaced sprakles,...those are not good ones to use btw
,....and the back ground,....
wire is a good idea,..but maybe a blak one would have been better,...
truth
getten better with concepts,....stay at them,....
it's cool, clean. i think it'll be even better WITHOUT the sparkly things inbetween the C and O and on top of the last O. the black wire would blend into the black bkgrnd so white wire is fine, or better yet gray would be good