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Furio

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Jul 30, 2002
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Help Change The World

There is so many people
But no one gets along
We don't like each other?
What the hell is wrong?

There is so much crime
From killings to rapes
We should love one another
We come in all shapes

Its hard to find,
Someone you can trust
You think you got a friend
Until they leave you in the dust

There is murder everywhere
Guns shooting in the air
Hitting little kids
But one gives a care

I try to stop the violence
But what I do can't help
There is still danger
And I can't hear every yelp

Make this world safe
Not for you, but for the kids
Murder of humans,
You know God forbids

I can't walk down the street,
Without getting in a fight
Why can't we just get along
Just for one night

Minorities have to struggle
Well majorities do too
I understand everyone's pain
And so should you

Just because,
I have a light colored skin
It doesn't mean you can judge me
You don't know where I have been

Don't judge a book
Only by its cover
Get to know each other
And see what you discover

Admit your faults
And don't show off your gift
If you see someone down
Give them a lift

Help change the world
Make it a better place
Let us all get along
Every gender and race
 
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All Out HOGG

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Not feeling it at all...

May i suggest...Instead of talking about the pain/cruelity of others in general...You talk about your own personal pain/problems

It adds alot'a emotion when what you write is based off emotions & not just written to be written...

Comprehand?
 
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Furio

Sicc OG
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Jul 30, 2002
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this is about the pain of the nation. and how you should help.
this is what i feel. this is what truly goes on in our streets
 
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All Out HOGG

Guest
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#4

This is a keyboard...This is my hand...This is how i type a response to your previous statement...

F-U-C-K-*SPACEBAR*-O-F-F
 
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Bone

Sicc OG
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Jul 11, 2002
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Instead of talking about the pain/cruelity of others in general...You talk about your

You asked for critism. Hogg was bein real wit you. Us the people want to hear somethin new. We heard that already- Michael Jackson did all that. The world is fucked up yes we know- Its the last days. Why is the world fucked in your eyes & your experiences(write some shit like that) Your young though- Keep it up. Your only gonna get better, do yo thizzle.




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