*!If This Song Doesn't Make Me A Top 10 Lyricist In The Bay, I'll Stop Rappin TODAY!*

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Apr 4, 2005
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it's a Nintendo/Video Game beat, similar ot "Lil Flip - Game Over" and "Cocoa Brovaz - Super Brooklyn"

this is a rare time im actually gonna post my lyrics........i kno its hard, but try not to bite.......

Pioneer, yeah ya boi sick
When I deploy scripts
So chicks who avoid clit
Can jump on my joystick
Yeah Im strapped fam, so kno wat I Pack, man
Will have you swallowin up shells like you Pacman
And I’m Robin(robbin) ya Sidekick if he got ya back, fam
So please believe you’ll have a Dark (K)night like Batman
My depth penetrates death, so watchu rock a vest for
Now hop on ship or you’ll be droppin chips like Connect Four

HOOK
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chicks And Change
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chips And Dames

I can spit it screwed up or faster boi
Universal Soldier like Pastor Troy
Now come up out them jewels and that jacket boi
Before we pop at ya stones like Asteroids
The video game when I’m stealin ya chain
Ante up punk, the kicks and the change
Now remember the name when im spittin these flames
Main Event Bitch, simple and plain
Listen to the west coast’s best flow explode
Vet’s know just don’t test those special
And blessed with heat, excessively
Who’s recipe for expressing
Aggression with weapons is heavenly
Especially when I’m stressed for beef
Deception detection is extra key
Put the barrel down ya neck like im testin for strepthroat

HOOK
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chicks And Change
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chips And Dames

I’m from the coast with really the most
Semi’s and toast, rims either spinny or spoked
Get loose girl, I got trees, Remy, and Hulk.
Thizz E’s or dro, what it takes to get me to poke.
I be where the freaks at
Hyphy if the beat slap
Tryna see them cheeks clap
Grimey when I beat cat
Try me wit ya weak raps
I see that ya team’s trash
Grind until you see cash
I could never be whack

HOOK
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chicks And Change
I Know Most U Niggas Really Think This Shit’s A Game
It’s Main Event Bitch, All We Chase Is Chips And Dames


Enjoy:

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May 12, 2002
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eastbayrider510 said:
no matter who you are 1 song doesnt make you a lyricist.
And also you can be a sick lyricist on paper but have a weak flow on the mic, annoying beat and horrible chorus. :rolleyes:

Haha sorry I'm just playing cuzzin, but wasn't feeling that track at all, the lyrics read well but you didn't flow on the track, it was like a recital.

And the chorus was plain irritating. Don't stop rappin today though, what the fuck do I know, maybe you could ghost-write for someone else.

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Jan 7, 2004
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TheWholeDamn said:
And also you can be a sick lyricist on paper but have a weak flow on the mic, annoying beat and horrible chorus. :rolleyes:

Haha sorry I'm just playing cuzzin, but wasn't feeling that track at all, the lyrics read well but you didn't flow on the track, it was like a recital.

And the chorus was plain irritating. Don't stop rappin today though, what the fuck do I know, maybe you could ghost-write for someone else.

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I was about to post some shit just like this when I was reading the lyrics I was thinking well damn I want to hear this song but when I heard it I thought it was awful someone else rappin it would be tight though.
 
Apr 25, 2002
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If those rhymes make you top 10 in the Bay, then the Bay has no talent.

Don't get me wrong, the rhymes were pretty good. At least you understand the use of multis and punchlines, but they weren't that good. Trust me, I've seen better on this very forum.

And the ghost-writing thing.. Unless you gonna ghost-write for someone mainstream with no rhyming ability at all, like E40 or Keak Da Sneak, it won't get you too far.