New Book - "SAN FRANCISCO AMERICAN GHETTO STORY" - Out Now!! Amazon Kindle Exclusive

[S.V]

Really I'm not a book inspector. If somebody from the yay where I live and listen to and ride for want to come out with shit. I aint gonna knock him. If some people think its funny to smash on somebody's work that's sucks shit to me. If I ain't feeling it I ain't gonna buy it but I for sure aint gonna knock it.

The reason why Northern California ain't dominating the entertainment industry cause everybody wants to see everybody else fail. You got people on here believing shit somebody else telling them about my book that ain't even read it. I read many professional books and have found numerous errors in grammar and spelling not saying mine has many. Because I have been told by many who have read the book that it's a very well written great read. So opinions or like assholes everyone has one. Like a movie critic tell you a movie sucks then you go and see it and love it. Be the judge of your own judgement before dick riding some Fugazi ass nobody's. On another note don't like it don't buy it ain't nothing but some McDonalds money. Can't even get gas in my motorcycle for the price the book is. Cheap muthafuckas.

 

[S.SAVAGE]

The reason why Northern California ain't dominating the entertainment industry cause everybody wants to see everybody else fail. You got people on here believing shit somebody else telling them about my book that ain't even read it. I read many professional books and have found numerous errors in grammar and spelling not saying mine has many. Because I have been told by many who have read the book that it's a very well written great read. So opinions or like assholes everyone has one. Like a movie critic tell you a movie sucks then you go and see it and love it. Be the judge of your own judgement before dick riding some Fugazi ass nobody's. On another note don't like it don't buy it ain't nothing but some McDonalds money. Can't even get gas in my motorcycle for the price the book is. Cheap muthafuckas.

That whole paragraph is a cop out.

"Fugazi ass nobodies" is your target audience.

I asked legit questions & you'd rather dodge the questions (& apparently dodge the proper use to the english language) than address your errors.

Daily bases
Four fifth teens
Make shore he was cool

...& that's just from the online 'sampler' ...aint nobody believing what other people telling them, it's plain as fuckin DAY, ONLINE.

you're a fucking DUNCE.

pay a professional editor.

I'm not a hater nor am I Nostradamus, ...but I see the future of this 'book' clear as fuck.

 

[DJ Coma]

The reason why Northern California ain't dominating the entertainment industry cause everybody wants to see everybody else fail. You got people on here believing shit somebody else telling them about my book that ain't even read it. I read many professional books and have found numerous errors in grammar and spelling not saying mine has many. Because I have been told by many who have read the book that it's a very well written great read. So opinions or like assholes everyone has one. Like a movie critic tell you a movie sucks then you go and see it and love it. Be the judge of your own judgement before dick riding some Fugazi ass nobody's. On another note don't like it don't buy it ain't nothing but some McDonalds money. Can't even get gas in my motorcycle for the price the book is. Cheap muthafuckas.

We're cheap muthafuckas? You were too cheap to pay to get your book professionally edited. You could have paid this guy $5 to proofread and edit your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/mrproofreade...e-the-fastest-turnaround-and-lowest-cost-edit

5 whole fucking dollars. You can't even put gas in your motorcycle for as cheap as it is to have somebody edit your writing. But we're the cheap ones because we won't pay you for a poorly written book?

Us saying that your writing has poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation is not just our opinion, it's a fact. There is right and wrong when it comes to that stuff. If I said the story was awesome or it sucked, then that would be just my opinion.

 

[macdrebaby]

We're cheap muthafuckas? You were too cheap to pay to get your book professionally edited. You could have paid this guy $5 to proofread and edit your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/mrproofreade...e-the-fastest-turnaround-and-lowest-cost-edit

5 whole fucking dollars. You can't even put gas in your motorcycle for as cheap as it is to have somebody edit your writing. But we're the cheap ones because we won't pay you for a poorly written book?

Us saying that your writing has poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation is not just our opinion, it's a fact. There is right and wrong when it comes to that stuff. If I said the story was awesome or it sucked, then that would be just my opinion.

 

[Spitz Unlimited]

We're cheap muthafuckas? You were too cheap to pay to get your book professionally edited. You could have paid this guy $5 to proofread and edit your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/mrproofreade...e-the-fastest-turnaround-and-lowest-cost-edit

5 whole fucking dollars. You can't even put gas in your motorcycle for as cheap as it is to have somebody edit your writing. But we're the cheap ones because we won't pay you for a poorly written book?

Us saying that your writing has poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation is not just our opinion, it's a fact. There is right and wrong when it comes to that stuff. If I said the story was awesome or it sucked, then that would be just my opinion.

/thread

 

[S.SAVAGE]

We're cheap muthafuckas? You were too cheap to pay to get your book professionally edited. You could have paid this guy $5 to proofread and edit your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/mrproofreade...e-the-fastest-turnaround-and-lowest-cost-edit

5 whole fucking dollars. You can't even put gas in your motorcycle for as cheap as it is to have somebody edit your writing. But we're the cheap ones because we won't pay you for a poorly written book?

Us saying that your writing has poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation is not just our opinion, it's a fact. There is right and wrong when it comes to that stuff. If I said the story was awesome or it sucked, then that would be just my opinion.

 

[EVERgREENRIDER]

IM REALLY UP ON THIS MUTHAFUCKIN BUS!

 

[Dana Dane]

You CANNOT justify putting out such a poorly written piece of shit. I actually downloaded the book & I'm STRUGGLING to read it. My IQ is up there in *genius* numbers, so miss me with any 'I'm not smart enough' to comprehend it bullshit. There is no way that any person with an IQ over 'moron' read this book & suggested it didn't need editing. It may be a great story, but I guarantee you the average person is not going to give it a chance. It's hard as fuck to read.... I'm not clowning, I telling you this from the perspective of someone who reads at least 4 books a week.

 

[Chree]

Ayo I've made racks on my version of this story. a real muthqfuckin hustla is gonna rock every chance they see to make bank. @S.V thanks for putting out such poor work. I'm making bank now.


If you wanna make some real money Jolla at a real hustla @S.V and I'll teach u how to shine son.


If u say u ballin well wassup reinvest it into xtraplan wbodi

 

[DeepEastBeast]

This nigga said that's why the bay doesn't get anywhere because we like seeing people fail, no the thing is people in the bay real as fuck and don't hold back when it comes to telling like it is if your book was dope people wouldn't be afraid to tell you that, but since the shit trash it is what it is you retarded ass muthafucka.

 

[S.V]

We're cheap muthafuckas? You were too cheap to pay to get your book professionally edited. You could have paid this guy $5 to proofread and edit your book.
https://www.fiverr.com/mrproofreade...e-the-fastest-turnaround-and-lowest-cost-edit

5 whole fucking dollars. You can't even put gas in your motorcycle for as cheap as it is to have somebody edit your writing. But we're the cheap ones because we won't pay you for a poorly written book?

Us saying that your writing has poor grammar, spelling, and punctuation is not just our opinion, it's a fact. There is right and wrong when it comes to that stuff. If I said the story was awesome or it sucked, then that would be just my opinion.

Yo Bitch ass ain't buy the book but you complain about grammar errors can't read the whole thing to no that if you ain't bought it.

And D @DANA Dame thanks for the purchase at lease you admitted it is a great story.
D @dee peastfaggot nigga you ain't from the Bay I can't see you.

 

[DeepEastBeast]

If I ain't from the bay why don't you bring yo faggot ass to Oakland and see what the kid about let me know when you out here BITCH ASS NIGGA

 

[BIGSBY]

Lol I didn't expect this opening up a thread about a book..... Anyone read undisputed truth?

 

[S.V]

If I ain't from the bay why don't you bring yo faggot ass to Oakland and see what the kid about let me know when you out here BITCH ASS NIGGA

Im Oakland !!! On International where you at and what yo coward ass look like post a picture of yo self faggot.

 

[DeepEastBeast]

Im Oakland !!! On International where you at and what yo coward ass look like post a picture of yo self faggot.

I knew you was a real life bitch you was really bout that action you woulda dropped a message like I said in the first place and met up with the kid but naw you wanna act like Macho Man and go back and fourth on here. Im done with you. You ever in the town drop me a message I'll be more then glad to tell you where I be at Sqaure ass nigga.

 

[Totenkopf]

The reason why Northern California ain't dominating the entertainment industry cause everybody wants to see everybody else fail. You got people on here believing shit somebody else telling them about my book that ain't even read it. I read many professional books and have found numerous errors in grammar and spelling not saying mine has many. Because I have been told by many who have read the book that it's a very well written great read. So opinions or like assholes everyone has one. Like a movie critic tell you a movie sucks then you go and see it and love it. Be the judge of your own judgement before dick riding some Fugazi ass nobody's. On another note don't like it don't buy it ain't nothing but some McDonalds money. Can't even get gas in my motorcycle for the price the book is. Cheap muthafuckas.

 

[Dana Dane]

No, no, NO you fucking simpleton. Re-read what I wrote... I didn't say it's a good story. I said it MAY be a good story but it's fucking incomprehensible...

And it's 'Least', not 'lease'. Jesus H. Christ will you get a fucking clue....

 

[Totenkopf]

Why is the book $9.69?

I think that is too expensive. Charles Dickens has a little book called 'A tale of two cities' and is under $5 from Barnes and Nobles.

Can you consider dropping the price S.V?

 

[NAMO]

Yeah I'd totally buy it if it was cheaper! I'd love to hear about hood stories from SF.

 

[DAT NIGGA TAZZ]

Really I'm not a book inspector. If somebody from the yay where I live and listen to and ride for want to come out with shit. I aint gonna knock him. If some people think its funny to smash on somebody's work that's sucks shit to me. If I ain't feeling it I ain't gonna buy it but I for sure aint gonna knock it.

No offense but do u really want a gangsta rapper that raps about rainbows representing the area you ride for?