New Artist!!!New Tracc!!!Tall T-"The Art Of Da Game"

[thizzordie916]

Ayo, mi namez Tall T an i rap wit mi homies da Looney Boyz. Im new to thiz rap game ya feel, so i want some real opinions on what i got. Cuz u kno most every1 cupcakes like "i hella like ur raps" or some shit but never tells me wat they really like, or a few hataz jus say "u cant rap" but I really wanna kno wat i can improve on, or how good i really am lyrically an everything like that. I gotta new tracc up called "The Art Of Da Game" i jus recorded on Monday so ima let yall hear it. It's not mi best song...lyrically wise i've hit harder i think...but hella people are feelin it, I mean over 200 plays in 2 days so i guess they like it. Get bacc at me tho wit some suggestions whether ur feelin it or not. I tried to get to some of the cats on here thru myspace but they jus read mi message an never responded, so get at me an stay up.

http://www.myspace.com/tallt1

 

[yes]

hmmmm......

quality is not that good
lyrically your not up that yet but you got potential kid just keep on practicing

....dont spit about what people like do you
work on the flow more it sounds a lil forced....so work on making your verse work better

just some constructive critiszm

 

[fed_life]

sound like you trying to sound like B.G.

YOUR word play could be way better...

your flow sounds way too forced...

sounds like yout trying to hard to make a rap song...

just some constructive critiszm

 

[thizzordie916]

ok. thanks 4 the advice. any more can keep commin. i think ima re-record it. wat should i do differant? jus flow more, not as choppy or some shit? cuz i was tryin to hit with the beat iz why, but i'll try diff. things.

 

[thizzordie916]

also im open for some free beats if any1 wants to hook me up. i need a hyphy beat or 2 to get on. they can be simple, im not askin 4 a hit tracc to make money off, but jus something that u can gig to ya feel?