cover opinions?

[bpnoid]

what u think?

 

[kingsvillektp]

i think you cut the guy off at a bad point. There are rules on visual points. But it's decent other than that. Not bad for a beginner...

 

[emma]

i don't like the font or the placement of the guy.

i do like the lighting/coloring of the guy though..

 

[bpnoid]

thanks 4 the feedback - first time i did a cover. video is my main thing

 

[bpnoid]

i don't like the font or the placement of the guy.

i do like the lighting/coloring of the guy though..

they requested the font be simple like that, i dont really like it either..

where would the face placement look better?

 

[D-Skrilla]

i don't like the font or the placement of the guy.

i do like the lighting/coloring of the guy though..

Same here. What's the purpose of the money being there?

 

[rych production]

ya the money looks weird just lying there

 

[Y-S]

I like your background concept, I feel the meaning!

p.s. graphically i'm not feeling it though

 

[bpnoid]

Same here. What's the purpose of the money being there?

come get your feet wet - see if tha bitch hold water - she gonna touch money as soon as them toes get wet

something like that - the music is on some real pimp shit

 

[SPORADIC]

Placement of the artist is terrible. There a rule of Focal Point in art and on covers the artist is it. You want the other elements surrounding him not vice versa... This whole piece needs work...

 

[EDJ]

gOOD WORK FOR A BEgINNER. I THINK YOU CAN MAKE IT WORK DESPITE THE FOCAL POINTS CAUSE THE FEET DO OFFSET THE ARTIST. SO THAT MEANS TO JUST BLEND HIM IN MORE AND gET HIM CLOSER TO THE CENTER. ALSO TRY TO ADD SHADOW OR BLEND THE MONEY IN MORE. YOU ALSO MIgHT TRY TO FUK WITH THE TITLE. EITHA PLACE UNDER HIM, CENTERED, CAPTIALIZED THE BEgINNIN' LETTER OF EACH WORD, OR JUST PLACE IT RIgHT UNDA THE FOOT. I DON'T KNOW, JUST FUK WITH SUgKESTIONS AND SEE WHICH ONE WORKS BEST FOR YOU AND CLIENT.

 

[BayBoss420]

its aright but i agree about the focal points, i look at the feet in the water first then just dont know where to go. Do something to make the artist be the first thing u go to then have it flow into the rest of the design

 

[bpnoid]

EDj & bayboss & sporadic - thanks 4 your feedback!

imma fuck around in photoshop right now...

 

[C.M.P CEO]

nice cover