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Sep 12, 2003
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im sitting alone in this apartment
stareing at da blood stain on the carpet
thinking about the next bitch thatll be my target
the smell of human liver comeing from the kitchen "flashbacks"
of my dad tellin me about my moma constetly bitch
after he jus got done beating my step momas ass
lookin at her with a bloody nose & broken jaw we jus laugh
my moma disapeared from earth when i was 7
started helping my dad beat my step momas ass when i was 11
this earth and life is hell theres no such thang as heaven
i took that away from my grandfather the satanic reaveren
he told me never take shit from someone & never trust a bitch
cuz all of them broads have dirty clits
and taking a 45 to they pussy lips will solve that shythang them by thier neck gutem and watch they blood drip

i seen this broad walking down the street
nice frame look like something good to eat
so i fallowed her to her front door
to make her pause i hollaed "HEY WHORE"
as she looks over left shoulder
i steped up and grabed a hold of her
by the throat i drag her across the thresh-hold
she strugles for oxagen as she chokes
had to ask the bitch if she smoked
lungs dont tast good sprinkled nicaten
soved a rag in her mouth so she couldnt scream
spread her legs to get to her thighs i hear her slightly whine
i leaned over and whispered are you gushy?
as i slide my 45 in her pussy

is that the timer going off on the oven
the sent of candy kedneys ..mmm... time fo grubin
sip a tast of her still warm blood
i got ster-fryed heart and deep stewed lungs
sit down for a four coarse meal
apitizers of deepfryed skin-peals
overies tender and sweet chilled brains is da best to eat
seasond all her oragen from
with the shit i scraped from her colan
bomb ass meal later ill be snoreing
 
May 10, 2002
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could be something just work on 1. staying on topic 2. keep shit real to yourself (dont bullshit) 3. try and make your verse complex add multi's or just bigger words people dont use all the time

p.s.

i wouldnt suggest using the lynch rap style everybody heard that shit before just trying to give good advice homie straight up...1
 
Sep 12, 2003
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i dont flow that way i write that shyt for fun and i did stay on topic its a story i wrote this ish like almost 2 yrs ago i jus wanted to see some sic shyt somewhere on the board


yo i liked that ish you did on ya dad that was nice

2 Bs and a P
 
May 10, 2002
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its all good i'm just telling you what i saw..and thats for the love on my dads verse I almost didnt post that shit cause fools clown on this board for softer shit...stay spitten man do ya thing...1